O men, who would have thought he would be so bold and try to change fate. I wonder if it is his fault that demons go instinct??? Great chapter :)

Yeah!!! Another story, looks very interesting. Very ecxited to see what you have in store for us :D

really liking theis story keep it up :)

It might be a good idea to seperate each character's dialogue into seperate paragraphs or at least specify who's saying what. It makes it a little difficult to tell who's the one talking.

I feel his pain, he has pups/children and he wants them to have a future. I hope Kagome will help him, I think. That's a hard one though. You can feel the emotions coming from both of them. Great chapter!!

'You are an old woman by human standards and yet I have never smelt the scent of a man opon your body, so virginal, and so pathetic.' Girl where do you get those stuff from. I love it, it is ggrreeaatt!!! Things are heating up!

Sessh is being very bad! but I get him, he is worried about his kind!

I love it already...It sounds very intriguing, and if it is anything like your other story it will be fantastic!

This is a very interesting story. Love how very conflicted Kagome is and how complex Sesshoumaru's character and the situation that you created are--mind boggling.

i see where this is going and i like it. it feels oiginal.

Interesting first couple of chapters. Please continue the story. I want to read what happens next.

whoops sorry i meant description

I love whole not aging idea along with being a teacher.also i love your depiction of the marketplace

I love it!! Hope you get 2 update soon:)

Oooooooo! What book did he take? What book did Sesshoumaru take? Naughty demon lord! Can't wait for the next chapter!  :)

Like you, only opposite, I tell myself I'm not going to read and favorite any new fics until I get caught up on the ooohhh so many sitting in my Favs folder waiting to be caught up on. Funny we humans, ne?

I really like this beginning and I'm as curious a creature as our Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for more...I'll keep my eye out for more!

p.s.  do take your time and make each chapter as refreshing and enticing as the last.   JEN