First of all I have to say I was very happy to see a new chapter too this story. You've done a bang up job so far, suckng us in emotionally, and the latest offering didn't disappoint. I had wondered if you had painted yourself into a corner as far as reconciliation, but you wiggled out of that nicely. However now grandpa is starting shit. So much fun...
I re-read the whole thing before reading this chapter because it had been so long I had completely forgotten.
This is getting TO THE GOOD PART, I can feel it.
If you keep us waiting again I'll track you down, I'll find you, I'll hunt you, I'll haunt you, I'll be right in the corner of your eye, ever present but just out of sight, I will be your predator, I'll invade your dreams, I'll prowl, waiting, around you and all those you love, and when I finally crack your mind... I'll eat every single cookie in your house.
This is not a threat, it is a warning.
Can't wait for the next chapter
.. (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Feb 2017
I truly enjoyed this chapter in some ways it reminds me of TexanLady "The Breeder" with Kagomes reluctance and Sesshomarus's unpending force..it seems that great minds..think likewise
Elisa (Chapter 20) - Sun 26 Feb 2017
Youre alive...! Yaaaaaaay! Thank you so much for the update, it really made my day :)
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