Thanks for the update. Poor Kagome. Can't wait to read more. This is my favorite Fanfic right now. Please update soon.
I find the idea that InuYasha would copulated with an animeted clay-doll not only stupid but ludicrous. Why would the hanyou, no matter how much he loves Kikyou, have sex with something cold, smelly, and most importantly, dead? This idea is just as stupid as the ridiculous writers who have them mated and go even far as having Kikyou end up pregnant. Really? Do you even stop and analize this at all? Then there's the ludicrous idea that Kikyou would've allow InuYasha to touch her in such a way. I highly doubt she slept with him while she was alive, and after coming back as an undead, the slim chance dwindling down to nothing. How more farfetch can you people get just to get InuYasha out of the way, can you be anymore uncreative?
barb (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
I think she has control of her mind and body...just not her powers or abilities that came with her power and it was a part of her so she feels incomplete now but i dont think she's a puppet....at least that is what i got from the explanation. Like if he says....jump up and down....her body wont be like a puppet and jump up and down uncontrolably.
Besides....if she became a total puppet, trapped inside her mind with no control of her body, then wouldnt sessh have to make sure he commanded her to do everything? Use the toilet, eat, wash yourself. Otherwise she would just lay there like a comatose patient.
Now that would be a huge pain for sessh since the kami obviously dont want her to die.
I could be wrong but thats what i got from it.
barb (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
I wonder what will happen. Will inuyasha say....eh thats ok, i wanted kikyou. Good luck sesshohmaru.
Or will he get mad and fight or promise to get her back somehow.
And if he doesnt care....how would kagome react? Break her heart maybe.
Part of me wants sesshoumaru's plans to fail but poor kagome :(
Nicole (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
Oh. My. God.
Despite all that has gone before, I still found this completely horrifying! If I read this correctly, Kagome is now a prisoner in her own body; her mind and will are trapped, and her body has no choice but to obey Sesshomaru while she watches herself. Again, I can't help but notice that Sesshomaru is deluding himself again: he has forced his physical desires on Kagome every time and his actions are the greatest threat to her safety! While I find his thinking about himself and humanity to be completely repulsive, I must say that you continue to do a very good job writing it.
Koi (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
HOLY MOLY!!!! This is getting soo good!! I can't believe Sesshy subdued her like that. I really didn't see that coming. I can't wait until the next chapter!
laura (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
Love it. I soooo need to read more :-) please update like NOW you talented writter x
Liking both chapters, keep it coming.
Alii (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
I can't wait until she gets back at him for all this. Like I am upset for her.
rose (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Oct 2014
next chapter please
seshoumaru doesnt ask. he takes XD
Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
I've really enjoyed reading your story and I look forward to the next chapter!
You are doing an amazing job. Thank you for your hard work! Can't wait to read what happens next. ;)
Penny (Chapter 10) - Fri 26 Sep 2014
First time on this site and your story is the first fanfiction I've read here. I'll have to say I certainly don't regret it :3
I'm really looking forward to more of this story. I absolutely love it, and your lemons are awesome :D
Your writing is exceptional and your plot is quite original. You have my most sincere condolences on your loss, btw.
laura (Chapter 10) - Wed 24 Sep 2014
Love it. Cant wait for more. Sorry to hear your news x
marisel (Chapter 10) - Wed 24 Sep 2014
sorry to hear about your family member. my prayers go to you. good chapter sess emtions are well shown and poor kags. shes shows so much tress. good chapter indeed.
Nicole (Chapter 10) - Tue 23 Sep 2014
You did a great job showing not only their emotions, but the clashes between and denials of the different emotional states.
Considering that she fears and resents the mating mark, does that mean he won't be using that against her too?
Im sry to hear about ur relative. I hope to read more whenever you get the chance to update. I think the story in awesome so far.
Holy crap! That was a tornado of emotions right there!
You are doing a wonderful job of explaining Sesshomaru's emotions. It's o easy to show Kagome, since she's a very emotional character, so it's nice to see Sessh's point of view. The poor guy is so confused himself that Kagome can't make any sense of what she endures. Good chapter, definitely good that you kept it short.
Oh you hit me right in the feels! Another awesome chapter from you. Poor Kagome, I felt horrible for her but definitely loved the spanking scene. Can't wait to see what happens when they see Inuyasha! Keep up the wonderful work!
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