This is very ni fee e, I found it a little confusing at times but is was very thoughout. To much going out but great entertainment. I do love your work. I hope you keep writing. It amazed me all the work you put to write a story WELL DONE. :):):):)
I don't understand what this has to do with the first chapter??? The first chapter describe the beginning of yokai and the Reiko welders and them you jump to
Over scene between rin and inu and the otherncouple? But you have my attention who's happen to the maidens??
wonderfully written and a captivating story loved it!
Awww! An excellent story! Well thought out!
I enjoyed reading this.
I've been loving that you are using real places and spirits in this story and that you are explaining them as you go!
Temper, temper...
I can't wait to find out what she did!
I greatly enjoyed watching Sesshomaru and Inuyasha act like adults with each other for the first time :)
Lol, if it weren't for the little bit of back-and-forth dialogue at the beginning, I wouldn't believe that Sesshomaru was listening past the words, "He's like my brother..."
All in all it was a good story. Got cheesy at times but good
Only thing wrong is the grammatical errors but hun, this story is great. I loved the prologue it really got my attention but it was a little confusing at first but i got it. Rin and Yasha, i love the way it happened. Makes sess and kags kiss seem plain. But i cant wait to read more
The story was awesome and I enjoyed it!
Maidens Mended was an entertaining read and I enjoyed every moment of it. Keep writing and grace us with more of your awesome talent.
i loved this story! you did a stellar job!
this was a great chapter! i am looking forward to what happens next.
Keep it coming.
You're doing a great job with the story, and I am sure the ending will be written just as you envision it in your head.
this was excellent! i cannot wait to see what happens next!
great chapter!
Keep the drama keeping.
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