For this to be your first time writing THIS WAS FANTASTIC! You had me hot for awhile there. Be proud of yourself for this lemon and your whole story. I am in love with this story. PLEASE writer SOON.
Another Awesome chapter, keep it coming.
I think you did an awesome job with this chapter! I give you kiddos and high five and all that good stuff!
| I thought that the lemon was tastefully done, and that it was a really good first time effort writing one.
tonya (Chapter 35) - Tue 27 Aug 2013
i thought this was a good chapter. can't wait to see what happens next.
If that was your first shot doing a lemon I think you did pretty damn good!!
Awesome chapter, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 34) - Fri 23 Aug 2013
fantastic chapter! i can't wait for the next chapter.
Andrea (Chapter 25) - Fri 23 Aug 2013
I really like this story! My only complaint is you have youkai and youki mixed up XD. They are youkai that use youki. Other than that, keep up the good work!
tonya (Chapter 33) - Thu 22 Aug 2013
i loved this chapter! you are awesome!
More, keep it coming.
Poor Shippo they sure gave him a fright. I can't wait to see what will happen when the girls encounter their last trial. Justice will be served soon to Sessh mom for her crimes and meddling!
Awesome, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 32) - Wed 21 Aug 2013
loved this chapter!
tonya (Chapter 31) - Mon 19 Aug 2013
loved this chapter! excellent!
Keep it coming.
Love it, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 30) - Fri 16 Aug 2013
this was a great chapter! good job!
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