Great chapter!! I really enjoy your creative process, how you tie in the elements of InuYasha that Sesshoumaru experiences and fights with and yet keeping him as close to character as one would expect of Sesshoumaru in that situation, all the while, factoring in the growth he gains with each passing day as his half-brother.
You are really progressing well as a writer, too! In a review of an earlier chapter, I had mentioned partnering with a beta to help with the end stages of chapter development. While that is a great tool for any author, I have found growth in every chapter you've written. I know in an AN you had mentioned a flame. Well, constructive criticisms aside, I am a reader who enjoys reading your work and looks forward to updates enthusiastically.
Continue the great work and hurry with the next . . . 100 . . . chapters!!! =)
<3 L
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
awww. fluff moments
More more. Please feed my addiction to your story.
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter...heh!
wow... the last line was just so..so... you know... perfect!
Nice, keep it coming.
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