Please dont feel frustraited or pressured. Most my reviews are also "Update soon" I think thats just code for "I love your story and am really looking forward to the next chapter."
You give long well written chapters and that takes time. I'm amazed you update as often as you do. And don't rush you muse. You want the best story you can write. Not the fastest. We will still be here enjoying your wounderful work.
You have such a way with words, easliy drawing the read in to the point that the end of the chapter is a shock back to reality. I can understand the want to demand more and faster updates. This story is very addicting! Don't be discourge and write at the paste that you are comforable with, I would rather you update with a chapter that you happy with and myself dealing with waiting than you rush and lose the magic that you are weaving.
Two chapters?! What did we do to deserve such a wonderful treat. I am so happy for our couple and flustered *fansself*. Amazing work as always. Please don't be discouraged, anything creative takes time and anyone with half a mind will always be willing to wait. I look forward to the next chapter, whenever that will be :)
Loren (Chapter 25) - Fri 10 Oct 2014
Good thing I had 2 chapters to read this time! I would'nt survive the wait for ch25!
That was sooo good! well writen, great development.
I think we all love bad Kagome from time to time... *wicked smile*:)
Please update soon! I love you writing and this dark fic style..
Great chapters, keep it coming
ana (Chapter 25) - Thu 09 Oct 2014
This story is great!! I am crying without knowing it myself..hehe I keep it up!
Dark and very revealing. Hard to face that in yourself.
Koree (Chapter 25) - Tue 07 Oct 2014
OMG !! Sooo Much Happened Amazing Chap :)
Aw!!!!!! Yea when he survives he would probably try to drive her away somewhat. While he wants her as his, I don't think he's quite ready to be vulnerable to her yet...
But she saved his life and he saved hers twice in this battle. So maybe she will forgive him just a touch :) Although, now that Sesshomaru is unconcious, how will he protect Kagome from Onigumo? She has no weapons. Also, how can Onigumo live still after his inugami died? I thought with the villagers, Onigumo would have died except Tatsuo signed a contract with him - so if Tatsuo is dead, wouldn't Onigumo die?
Cannot wait for more!
Great chapter! I was hoping something like that would happen. ;)
alii (Chapter 25) - Sun 05 Oct 2014
Man you have me crying over here, that was sad as hell. Please update soon!
awww so cute
bri (Chapter 24) - Sat 04 Oct 2014
LOVE!!!!!
Alii (Chapter 24) - Fri 03 Oct 2014
That was intense! Please update again I am elated with this chapter.
FFFFF (Chapter 24) - Fri 03 Oct 2014
OF ALL THE BLOODY CLIFFHANGERS *flips ten tables*
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 24) - Fri 03 Oct 2014
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!
That was the meanest cliffhanger in the history of fanfiction!! How could you do this? My weekend is ruined! I would never be able to sleep again until I find out what happens next! What did we ever do to deserve such agony? Are you in reality so evil that at this very moment you are rubbing your hands in glee while laughing evilly thinking of all the anguish you have caused the readers?
This must be some sort of evil plot to make us beg!
OK, you win! PLEASE! Pretty please!!! I beg you!!! (Kneels down and lowers forehead to ground) Don't leave us like this! I would do anything to get the next chapter! You can't leave us like this! You can't make us suffer by torturing us with this pain! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Uh ho!!! I think the true Kagome is coming through the pain and darkness. Her light is an intricate part of her - so even if it does darken and her soul is filled with despair, she isn't the type to just let someone she cares for (maybe even loves) die in front of her.
I am thinking wither she or Onigumo will take the fatal blow for Sesshomaru.....that or Kagome will kick Tatsuo's butt!!!! And its about time Sesshomaru stopped lying to himself.... But how will he fix his mistakes with Kagome once she is free from Tatsuo's control?
Nicole (Chapter 17) - Thu 02 Oct 2014
"What evil schemes does Sesshomaru have in store for the missing Kikyo?"
Shouldn't that be: what evil schemes does our lovely, devious authoress have in store for the missing Kikyo...? ;)
"Will Kagome be able to convince Sesshomaru there was good inside humans?"
Only if she can also convince him that there is also some good inside himself...
"Or will she, too, become corrupt or possibly go mad from a world full of evil men?"
Well, PTSD, at the very least, even if she doesn't actually go insane. At this point, I have a hard time picturing Sesshomaru being able to corrupt her: you've given her a personality that is far to introspective for him to take her too far - except maybe in the heat of the moment.
Ana (Chapter 23) - Wed 01 Oct 2014
Well, that was a twist *-* xD
1º - I'm glad Sess didn't rape her :3 It wouldn’t go well with the story
2º - That lemon.... *-* It let me "dry" if you know what I mean xD
3º - I would love to see a bit more of Kazuo in the future. *-* (maybe a bit of action! *-* I'm bad xD)
4º - Sess lies are coming to the surface. And this is bound to create damaged... :/
Love the story darling. It's really really good.
Thank you so much for the updates! <3
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