What!!???Why Mah boy Sesshomaru disappointed me!!!
Well, that's a great cliffhanger, or you're just teasing us,hhaha hah, I love how you potray sesshomaru in here mysterious and sexy, he's like a dark chocolate, and also here's my favorite line in this chapter
Do you know what it means, for a daiyoukai to lust after a human?”
“It means that he is weak,” he continued, his free hand easing down the flat plane of her stomach, gooseflesh peppering her satiny skin in the wake of its descent. “Unworthy.”
That is sooo Good!!! Mah Boy Sesshomaru was Battling himself not to give in to the temptation that is kagome...hahaha tho i wish that they've done that LOL but yeah it was still good because you've done a good job writing this hahaha... I've been waiting for this update and i feel so elated when i have received an email - a notice of an update for this story, Thanks alot for writing an update, ilove you! I shall wait for more and see what else could the demon lord would go through just hear kagome say his name! Til next time! You're awesome!
Thanks for the update! Great development
Gee (Chapter 9) - Mon 02 Apr 2018
Just another fanfic I like that is still on progress. Keep writing pls~ can't wait for the next chapter!
This next time is still pending here 4 years since last update...and it is killing me. I am slowly falling in love with how dark you manage to make Sesshoumaru in your story, both this and S t a s i s. It feels true to his personality as portrayed by both manga and anime. Many stories tended to soften that inhuman edge but yours stayed true so far. And it is intriguing. I am also both wanting and not wanting to follow S t a s i s. This is due to fear of being depressed due to how dark the story is since I do suffer depression, and how gripping the tale that I can't help but want to know the ending to. And this story also echoes that same darkness from S t a s i s Sesshoumaru. Except in this one Kagome is receptive while in the other Kagome all but want to die in every interaction only to find out that they will be bound even in death and perhaps in the next reincarnation.
Kinda want to make me see them in Bleach!AU where Sesshoumaru is an unfeeling Arrancar too powerful to care for Aizen's plot and Kagome a human miko that ended up in Hueco Mundo because she fell through a random Garganta rift in her family's old well...hmm...story plot coming up here...but bleh, you can take that. I also love how borderline Yandere your depiction of Sesshoumaru is. I have always have a weakness for psychotic love interest even though I know that will only end in heartbreak...
Ah, this have nothing to do with this story but in S t a s i s Side Story, Sesshoumaru is slowly desiring her heart didn't he? Because that is the only thing she won't give him and the only thing he can't force her to give him and the only thing she have that he doesn't own. Will this story follow the same pattern?
Also, in Transgression, Sesshoumaru is conflicted between loving her and hating her and this shows through their interaction. He does not believe in love and see himself above it. And this will perhaps show in how he will interact with Kagome and will be the biggest hurdle that he and Kagome will have to go over if they want to actually have a mutual relationship as oppossed to Dominant vs Submissive type of relationship that Sesshoumaru will undoubtedly enforce Kagome into. Sesshoumaru of your depiction is on point, he is not a gentle creature or at least not in regard to her. Even his interaction with Rin is akin to owner and pet. And Sesshoumaru is possessive, add obsessive to that and Kagome stand no chance...
Ah...I am rambling but I do so hope I manage to spark some inspiration for continuation for this story. I always find that a good review helps a lot...
More please! I love the vividness of this story, it’s lovely!
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