Damn this is so good and realistic. I can see what's happening since it's so well written
The story is really good ,enjoyed to the max power especially your over react in the sex scenes. Why it is that people always make sess an ehem overachiever at sex. Poor little kags always with the tall, big yokai. But anyways I enjoy all your stories . And a love how you wrap the mother in law and a 3 kid litter for kags.
You did not mention if she ever get to see or live to the modern era uh or thats for another story. ...
ponpiri (Chapter 31) - Tue 30 Apr 2019
Thanks for adding his mamma. This was a fun way to wrap the story.
Inuyaoi (Chapter 31) - Mon 22 Apr 2019
I finished this a few days ago but sometimes the words don't come out right, so I waited to review. You're one of my favorites, as you know-- and I've got to catch up on Control and will do that. This story was everything I hoped it would be. Lucky me I didn't have to wait five years for it to finish! I love your Sesshomaru. He's my favorite, always will be. Don't argue because there's no point. I love your writing, and as I've said, if you ever, ever publish original works I will be one of the first to buy it.
great story when can we expect a sequel!! it was so exciting
Vale (Chapter 31) - Tue 16 Apr 2019
Can’t believe this is done. What a ride! I enjoyed every second of it. Thank you so much for this piece x love you
Alison (Chapter 31) - Mon 15 Apr 2019
Thank you for writing such a great story that stayed true to the original so well!
That was amazing!
I'm happy that kagome didn't just fall into his arms right off the bat at the end there. Some time and separation after what they have been through.
I'm so happy you finished this, but at the same time.... What will I read and look forward to know.
I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
I totally enjoyed this story. I am always amazed at the creativity that brings forward the unique perspective for the story. Look forward to more as life allows.
Well shucks. I'm sad to read it's over, I've been invested since the beginning. But as the saying goes, " all good things must come to an end." At any rate congratulations on finishing this story! And I'm so happy you saw it through to the end. I cant wait to see what else will come from the fantastic brain ot yours!
Cheers and all that extra stuff,
TIO
Silver (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Apr 2019
Love your work!! This was an amazing story, will be going back to re-read it!! Thank you for sharing these characters in such a beautiful way!
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