How clever, devious, and ingenious she is! Your portrayal of Kagome is truly delightful! She has been in love with him for so many years that she simply doesn't know how not to be anymore, so she twisted that feeling into its exact opposite - hate. It happens, yes, it does. I cannot wait to see her exacting her revenge on him! It will be so gratifying!
Sesshomaru on the other hand is the personification of selfishness in this fic. I do hope the fruits he reaps due to his behavior will be bitter, totally unpalatable! Both Rin and Kagome desreve better, way better than what he could ever give them!
Loving this fic! Excellent use of the prompts, too!! Can't wait for more!!
Akita (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
two words...more please
Debra (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
Well, at least Rin was smart enough to end it. He was already going back to his usual ways. I'm a Sesshoumaru/Kagome fan, but i don't she should continue to want someone that will never change and has hurt her to much. Since you have a tragety on there I'm hoping Kagome is long gone when he finally comes to his senses. She's a nurse, she could transfer anywhere, even out of the country. An old friend of mine moved here to the U.S. from Canada cuz of her nursing job. Anyway update soon please.
Luna C. (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
Man, Kagome is so manipulative, I like it lol!
Nicole (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
Well, Sesshomaru, you definitely deserved that. As much as I dislike manipulative!Kagome, part of me really wants her and Rin to both dump Sesshomaru's unworthy ass and hook up with each other. Rin seems better than both of them, but Kagome seems like she has a greater chance for personal redemption than Sesshomaru does.
Caera (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
Awesome!more please...
rose (Chapter 4) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
next chapter please
Debra (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Feb 2014
Please have her end their relationship, or start seeing someone. She really is pathetic so far. I want to see her get even. I want to see him realize his screw up and not have a clue where to begin fixing it. If she really wants to get Rin to question their relationship. She should make it clear that she is done seeing him. Just like that, any woman would wonder about the wording. When you fight with a friend you say I'm not talking to him right now. I'm not seeing him anymore is something you use when referring to a boyfriend. Unless Rin is really stupid she should notice the wording especially if Kagome where to not explain the fight and act sad for Rin instead of her self. yes, he could lie to Rin in the beginning, but a guy like him will lose it if he finds out Kagome is seeing other people.
anyway update soon please!
Answer to summary: I hope he was too late, far too late.
Delicious. I'm quite content with how this is going. I would live to see her fall in love with someone else and just destroy him.
Caera (Chapter 3) - Sat 08 Feb 2014
Boy,oh girl! A very different view on a Sess/Kag story. Very refreshing indeed!
More chapters please! :)
Karen (Chapter 3) - Sat 08 Feb 2014
She better make him work for it, like WERK BITCH, work for it and not give in almost right away when he tries to get her back!
Holy holy guacamole! I love this first chapter! Great job, I can't help but feel bad for poor Kagome. Hope she kicks him in the nuts! What a jerk face!
:P
Luna C. (Chapter 2) - Fri 07 Feb 2014
The first half of this chapter, my jaw dropped at Sesshomaru's part! Omg his behavior makes me wanna strangle somebody! But Kagome's part, I was like "You go girl, sabotage that ish! Make that fool pay!", but really, her part with her way of thinking and how she was replying to both of them as if nothing was wrong with her is something I would do. xD I could relate to this lmao!
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