Ooooooooh my god lololololol I laughed so hard at Shippo's response about the titty fucking. That was so...WOW! I enjoyed it though How he's changed and matured and..how skilled he has...ahem...become in the ways of the flesh. NICELY DONE! I also enjoy how protective Kazuhiko is of Kagome and how he threatened Hijo hahahaha. He is so much like his father. You've developed his character beautifully, as well as Shippo's. I wonder if Mina's daughter will be able to open a portal even though she's still young. I enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to #31 this week yaaaaay! You're so awesome! Thanks so much for the fantastic update!
Chapters 29 and 30 were awesome!! Loved every second of them! I can't wait until Kagome can find her way back to the West!! I also love Shippo and his new found maturity. All I can say is more please! And thank you for writing such great stories.
Debra (Chapter 30) - Mon 26 Jan 2015
Liked that you had more Kagome and Kazuhiko in this one. Hope you update soon.
I have to admit... the idea of men fucking Shippou as a woman is EXTREMELY disturbing, so I'll forget I read that... otherwise, awesome chapter! I so look forward to thursday!!!
Koree (Chapter 29) - Sun 25 Jan 2015
Lol Awww Shippo Isn't A Young Virgin Anymore * inserts tears * I Can Handle Shippo & Rin But Kazu & Kagura.... :/ Ehh No Maybe Because She Older Idk What It Is xD
Koree (Chapter 28) - Sun 25 Jan 2015
Ehhhhhhhhh Idk How I Feel About Kagura Trying To Move In On Kazu :/ Lol
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NO MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon! I know life is hectic, I find it hard to update, myself! But I have to ask lol :D
This chapter made me cry!
Oktobre (Chapter 29) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
I'm ready to read more! I love this story! I'm ready to see Kagome and Sesshomaru back together and take down that low life Lord Richard. I hope you post a new chapter really soon. I love this story so please finish it!
GAAAHHHHH! I love it!!!
I had to use a lot of will power to stop myself from reading just so I could review! I LOVE this story SO FREAKING MUCH. It's so imaginative! And well written, detailed without being boring, the character development is smooth and believable; everything about it is beautiful.
Shaina (Chapter 29) - Wed 21 Jan 2015
I loved It. I think shippo and rin are a great pairing. Your story is amazing and I always look forward to reading the next chapter.
Cant wait to read the next one keep up the great work your an amazing writer.
Eva (Chapter 29) - Tue 20 Jan 2015
I was wondering after your introduction. I have read fics where Kagome is forced to go through that coming of age with Sesshomaru's son or even her own son. I love Rin and Shippo. I ship them, so that was a relief. Kagome is going to have a fit when she gets back. I hope it grows back fast.
I like this story very much. I have not commented on this story since when you first posted it but I have been reading each chapter that you post right away. In my opinion, the sex scene with Shippo and Rin was tastefully done. You did a great job writing in Shippo's perspective. Maybe this will lead to a deeper relationship between the cute couple. I always liked the idea of Shippo and Rin together. It seems that they were made for each other. Looking forward to future updates.
mah (Chapter 29) - Tue 20 Jan 2015
i need more.... this is one of the best fanfics ive read !!! the only problem is i read through them too fast and then im stuck waiting T_T
keep up the good work and i cant wait for next chapter !!!!
Awww! i liked Seshomaru's hair long! What caused him to all the sudden change it because I thought Kagome also metioned she liked it long as well? And why did Mina move and not send word to Sesshomaru before, I thought they did business together. And if that's the case it seems pretty suspicious.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
This was good. I liked the way time past and i liked the way you delt with shippou
Noo he cut his hair!!!! What will Kagome think of this? Also can't wait for your next update. :)
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