you sure know how to pull a tear jurker but with such a great loss there needs to be a great joy also . but it waws great and i hope sesshy pups kags that would be funny to read
its 12:57 A.M on a sundaynight/monday mornign and i have to go to school in 4 hours ad you leave me WITH THIS?! arghhh, well...everything is great so far i have been reading your fic non-stop, so i have large hopes of reading it till the end. What i like about your story is that it is complez and very well written and detailed, but it doesnt go off on tangents like many storyies tend to do. i hpoe this doesnt happen because the chemistry between all of your characters is amazing and very real/organic, which truly makes a story great. so i love this and olease continue
I love this story just need some faster updates.this story has me anticipated for the next thing
bri (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Dec 2014
oh crap! this is going to change their realtionship...he better not make her wait or refuse her!
Omg t.t
I was hopeing to see her
and toga figt but OMG so good
oh no.......Since Kagome cannot battle Touga, wonder what they will do next.
Why can't he use Tenseiga? Attacking the West like that is so cowardly........I hope the Queen of Cyrene gets her punishment. She could have quietly said something to Sesshomaru to ask for assistance instead of turning traitor.
Thank you so much for the update!
Debra (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Dec 2014
This was a great chapter. Sucked that she didn't get to actually challenge Touga like they had talked about. At least they still won the battle. Poor Sesshoumaru still had so many issues that they needed to work out. Though I guess now there won't be someone who is constantly trying to order Sesshoumaru to do what he believes is best for the country.
hope you update soon.
VivWolf (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Dec 2014
Ittle confused... maybe it's the lack of sleep...but who is Emiko again? And how/when/why did they decide to go visit other people?
Felt like a rough transition between ch 20 to ch21. Still a well written chapter and intriguing, of course.
Please continue, can't wait for your updates. Love it!
No Uta (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Dec 2014
Oh no. Poor Inuyasha losing both parents. I definitely did not see this coming at all. Kagome's last words ro Touga were harsh ones, how dreadful. Also I think Sesshomaru and him also had words about not want him to take Kagome as mate if I am not mistaken. Oh wow...how ver sad for everyone involved. I'm anxious to see how Sesshomaru handles this in battle. Another great chapter! Thanks so much for the update!
No Uta (Chapter 20) - Fri 05 Dec 2014
Hooraaaaay! YUUUUSSSSS. He took bitch. He took bitch. He took bitch. ;-) Great flippin chapter!
So sad, keep it coming.
Nell (Chapter 21) - Thu 04 Dec 2014
no I wanted her to stand up to toga but I didn't want him to die guess what are going to do but great chapter I was kinda hoping she got to fight him and get her rights to Sesshomaru by fighting but I love it I love it I love it I love it thank you for another great chapter hope you update soon your fan
Omg!!
i have been so mad at Toga, but that last scene broke my heart for both brothers! I hiope Sesshoumaru doesn"t shut Kagome out, I hope he allows her to help him with defeating the East and healing the West, Hopefully the people of the West will really realize she is one of them and will be its strength not its weakness1 My other favorite part is the growing closness between Kagome and Sesshoumaru that scene when she asks him what he needs and he really just needs her closness he needs her as a mate! my heart filled with happiness. I look forward to your next chapter. thanks for being a great storyteller!!!
I love your stories and your writing style, even as I sit here crying out "NO" for Toga and Izayoi.
aww just went it was getting interesting with inutaisho
Well that was depressing and quick....
Awww though he was kind of a bastard I still liked him. :( Well can't wait for the next update.
Such a sad chapter. Now they will never know what his father would have done. Well I guess Kagome no longer has to battle, but I forsee a fight with Sess.
Totally hot!!! It's truly freezing here and I'm so hot and sweaty because of this. Very intense and it's so great that Kagome never gave up her house in the human realm!
I liked how Kagome is finding answers and showing her anger and dominating a situation when it calls for it. Kagura ever being 'nice' to Kagome is interesting. You're doing a great job. I totally love this! JEN
Haha yes finally lol. Also I think I love scary Kagome. (^.^)
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