LOLOLOL this chapter made me laugh... for some sick reason *ack* I thought we'd be having ourselves a bit of yaoi! And I appreciate the strawberries, whipped cream, and chocolate syrup! Our little inside joke :D Well, we've got ourselves some serious chocolate syrup! From your heads-up, I was anticipating this... And you didn't let me down (as if you ever do :D)
I think this was my favorite chapter of Korekuta so far! We got some hot n sizzling Sessho action, and he's proving himself to be the dark monster of our nightmares (or in your and my case, daydreams)!
Excellent work, my friend. I know how hard this must have been for you, what with being dopey on pain meds, but you pulled it off flawlessly. Cheers!
-Stardust Miko
hm perhaps thats Sesshomarus plan - to seperate Inu and Kagome even more.
Believing her to be mentally unstable would result in Inu putting some type of distance between them.
Though I am wondering, there should be something else Sesshomaru wants from her but I haven't figure it out yet......
I want more~~ I really wanna know what Sesshoumaru is friggin' planning!
Hahaha I loved this chapter woman :) I like this Inu! Hmm wonder why Sesshomaru didn't show himself... But maybe he heard Kagome saying she didn't mean to take back her sacrifice, and made Kikyo okay again? And it's fine if it's a love triangle. The more strain and cliffies, the better :P Although you might give me heart seizure if you gimme too many cliffies.
Crap crap craaaaap! Is he gonna let her fix it? >.< I knew this would happen
Oh my! Just when you think things can't get even more crazy! I really like your choice in writing style for this story - the first person narrative combined with the third person. I think it's also a very interesting take on YoukaiYume's Willow. Great job! :)
-FDS
Hmmmmmm he's up to something
He obviously wants her very desperate, so he'd probably exchange something else for her promise, so now he will want her.....and what else?
One thing I am curious about - I am sure there are many other people out there that would be desperate enough to pray to Sesshomaru and do whatever he wants - so why has he concentrated so long and hard on Kagome? What brings him to her so much?
Oh no! Kikyo is having a relapse! I should feel sorry... But somehow I don't. Is that bad? Hahaha :P Anyhoo, great chapter. I love how you stressed that Kikyo was beautiful; in the anime and manga, she was always prettier than Kagome, and a lot of fics choose to portray her as ugly and weak. So right when she was finally coming around, she starts the coughing-up-blood again... *sigh* You have me so engrossed in this story, woman, it's not even funny... HAHAHA!
Yayyy! No Uta has pulled through again! Excellent update, well worth the wait! The part about Kagome and Inuyasha's blood, that was freaky! Give me goosebumps much? Wow, Kagome's having a whole bunch of nightmares... And is that why Kikyo was near her? Okay, I'll stop babbling now... Great chapter! Keep on keeping on!
take it back? But she made a pact...is he really going to turn back time and take Kikyo's life back? Or is he going to make Kikyo ill again to punish Kagome and make her commit to this once again? curiouser and curiouser
When will sesshy collect her debt payment?? I wonder :S
Super intrigued! You updated a lot more than I expected, I wasn't aware you'd been updating! Can't wait to find out what happens next :D
| Why she's bleeding? Is it pms or something that from sesshomaru claws?
Whoa, that was intense! Did that really happen, or was that all in her head?? I suspect not... Hahaha, this story is so fun to read! Keep up the great work, my friend! I can't wait to see the chapter when it all goes down for real!
hm interesting turn of events.......so is he wishing to driver her made/insane to the point she is no longer "pure" in body and mind and begs for death or is too insane to care? or is his desire to mold and break her to a degree that she is similar to him, in darkness?
rose (Chapter 5) - Sat 04 Apr 2015
next chapter please
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