Attention: This is NOT your usual sesskag fic.
That been said, this is a much more "seinen" version than many of these, it will have you on the edge of your seat. Reminded me a lot of those really dark romance movies with various shades and levels, there's no black and white, there's no prince and only no "one love above all", that's is really refreshing. Angelhart is so good when writing angst, that girl know how to make me suffer, oof. This is not usually the stuff I like but nonetheless well written, I found Kagome and specially Sesshomaru well portrayed in a dark, non romanticized and realistic way (no, there's no rape). I highly recommend this fanfic.
I could not stop reading this story till the end. The story was good and complex. Kagome refusing to move on was so frustrating, I mean practically everyone was telling her too, but still, let her make her own decision. She just couldn't find it in her to leave Inuyasha, but in the end, she stays with him and lie about the kid. She was selfish and self-centered throughout the whole thing, which is similar to her personality in Inuyasha.
In some way through sex, she ended up having a connection with Sesshomaru, Missouri loves company to no feelings attached even though I love him. She not wanting to get over Inuyasha made her stubborn, and even though she goes to the past, she still won't be able to change a thing, she will just have to deal with her decision. It would also mean, Sesshomaru's interaction with kagome In the future wouldn't happen. She loves Sesshomaru but is willing to put it aside because she knows he won't feel the same in the past, that didnt mean she couldn't try to make him.
Sesshomaru also had an attachment that he couldn't let go. Rin, kagome bringing up if he loves her like a lover, I'm happy he didnt say yes, but his action made me question it. Sesshomaru came to see kagome off, which I agree with kagome was unusual. He most likely wanted her to stay, but he's stubborn. If he would have told her to stay, she would have. I was hoping she would have too, especially finding out that she was having his kid. Both would have to find happiness eventually. I think she had more chance of finding happiness in the future than in the past. Because in the past, she will have to watch every event that unfolds with what she knows. Inuyasha will be upset knowing she lied to him, and that she slept with his brother.her daughter questioning about her father, and rin death.
Kagome wrote the diary of her past and told her to choose, she repeated the same choice, so I don't understand why she would write it again in her diary if she will die anyway. Lastly, Sesshomaru knowing that is his daughter in the past and not questioning her on it, is weird. Instead, he just accepts it. The story was good, but the ending could have had more detail on the events when she arrived, and how it changed the future.
Been following you since chapter 11. Kinda like the twist in the ending. I think she loved Sesshomaru too. Going back, she got to have his child, still see him and have back her first love, InuYasha. Kinda selfish in some ways but how can you judge her? The whole situation was crazy and the story was incredible. Gonna miss it.
I enjoyed reading this immensely. I don’t know if I would consider it a romance given the nature of their relationship, but that’s neither here not there. It’s an excellent piece. Thank you for the great read! I particularly liked the ending where Sesshoumaru could recognize what the truth was about the little girl and then just go with it. Kagome’s a bit of a rat with her decision there, but I think it makes sense given that her and Sesshoumaru were more physical than anything and undefined rather than romantic.
CRYING. Sesshoumaru being there when Rin died and being there for her the way he did has me a mess. Well done.
Aumi (Chapter 40) - Wed 04 Sep 2019
I love love love your writing and I do adore this ending because its a bit unexpected. lol but even though I love this ending I feel like Kagome cheated (Future sessomaru out of his child) and cheated InuYasha with the truth. All in all Kagome seemed very focused on herself and only herself, which is a bit of a let down.
Still I love your work.
Kagome cuddling with Dhippou gave me all the feels! And I love how he’ll take shots at Sesshoumaru. Lol
Sleeps with him and then “I don’t like you.” I’m dead. Lol
This was a great chapter. i Like how you show sex as being an emotional human need rather Than a quick tryst for the hell of it. And Kag’s reaction there was gold.
You’ve got me hooked! And i love Sesshoumaru’s portrayal so far!
Ree-san (Chapter 40) - Tue 03 Sep 2019
Yea, I feel like she cheated Inuyasha. Does he deserve to be lied to that it's his child? She also cheated future Sesshomaru. But, she remained the self focused throughout the story so not too surprising how she handled that. So I guess I would be in the not liking it camp.
My brain will not allow me to understand that this story is over. Nope ????
Poor Rin. Fascinated to see how this all wraps up!
Omg it seems like I've been waiting forever for this update. Can't wait for more.
This story is amazing! And I am so beyond happy that you’re not leaving us hanging and are going to finish it. I’m also still very curious about Kagome’s throwing up moment and what that could possibly mean. Especially considering Sesshomaru‘s mother‘s warning.
This story is incredible. Lost a whole night if sleep reading all the chapters. Please post soon!!!
Ahhhh!!!! I really hope she doesn’t use that damn well....so happy for the update.
I tried to look at the work in progress page but couldn’t get it to work. So I will just have to be wait and hope the next chapter is soon! I love this story and I’m so excited to see where ir goes.... and if Kagome is preg cause that would be a fun turn im events.
this is interesting i wonder what will sesshomaru do. . please dont make her back ????
Omg I need more!!!! I was in tears!!! This us too good!!
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