That was a great chapter! Sesshoumaru may have a little competition now knowing Kouga still have a thing for Kagome! LoL And as for Shippo. . . OMG! O_o I love it!!!!
I wonder, where is Ayame? It is a fun chapter to read, keep on writing ^.~
Glad to see some of Kagome' fire back. Fun chapter, I liked it.
Maybe making love session in the bathroom sounds good XD
It's not just that it's sad I just wasn't to know why is she aslwasys looking for a fight wasn't yelling and to get a raise all while covered in vomit? Wasn't nice he gave her something to stop achol poisoning?
All six chapters are nice, keep it coming.
Mona (Chapter 16) - Sat 17 Oct 2015
Is it wrong of me to want Kagome to hurt Sesshoumaru or hae him submit to her. She is the strong Shikon Miko after all, so her strength should be shown instead of her bending or being forced to bend to others, i.e. Sesshoumaru.
looking forward to what comes next and hopefully it's the spit fire (more) Kagome I'm used to in the anime/manga.
Shippou disguised as Inuyasha to get a kiss! Will Shippou disguised as Sesshoumaru to get more than a kiss? :D Can not wait for the next chapter, the next chapter, and chapter 18!
It's so wonderful! But please i love the moment between sessh and kags. . More please!!!
Just another quicky! The part where Shippo took on the illusion of InuYasha! Ohhh wooow! Was holdin' my breath while reading that part! At least he got to kiss her once, right? Very interesting take on that situation. You handled it beautifully! Post soon!
Wolves!!!!! That is so awesome!! Sesshomaru is gonna be livid! Can't wait to meet Koga again! Really miss you when you stay away. I know how hard it can be gettin the words out of your head and actually written down.and then being satisfied and confident enough in it to post.I have my own Sess/Kag story whirling round in my brain. I can relate.lol. sometimes i hav trouble keepin sesshomaru in character but you got a great hold on that! Im really interested in how you develope his (should i dare say emotions ) as your tale continues.But anyways. Really love your story.You're fantastic! Keep it up!
Yeah the wolf's are alive this just keeps getting better.
Yay for updates. Can't wait to see what happens next with her brothers. :)
I assume Koga going to make a scene.
wait, Shippou fall in love with Kagome? Now you've made me curious, what is Reno look like :)
Shippo wants kagome! Omg ..dun dun dun...what will happen next time!??..what is Sesshomaru thinking!???....
Akoq (Chapter 14) - Mon 17 Aug 2015
I hope kagome move on. I hope sesshoumaru just a stepping stone for her. I hope she did not fall in love with him. I hope her heart hardened. I hope shippo remains as her kits. I hope she find happiness in others. I hope sesshoumaru have to watch it all and feel a twinge of regret.
Alashia (Chapter 14) - Mon 17 Aug 2015
Wow! The conversation between Shippou and Sesshoumaru got a little heated there. I can't believe Shippou is in love with Kagome! I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship will turn out to be. You're awesome!
Thanks for the update, you made my day ;)
Really enjoyed the chapter. I liked the interaction with Shippou and Sesshomaru. He likes to tease, but knows the limits now that he is older. Really interested to see what happens next. And I agree with Sesshomar, in that Kagome would see Shippou still as a son.
Wood burn! hahaha what kind of other 'burn' Kagome have next chapter? :p great chapter as always
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