I have a fanfic that could really use the critical eye of a Beta or two.
I may not have any previous works written,
but I've been a roleplayer for atleast 16 years now.
So though it's my first fanfic it's not my first attempt at writing.
I would really prefer to keep this fanfic's plot under wraps,
but some information can be provided.

I have developed the general plot of this story and have made a mark up timeline of how it will progress (though I am aware I may deviate as time goes on).
This will be Mature rated for future lemon/lime scenes as well as violence and crude language.
It is going to be lengthy as the first two chapters already consist around 15k words total.
And it will be fairly slow written.
I don't mind if I get a few beta readers.
Thats actually more ideal that way should one not be able to continue,
the fanfics posting would not be further postponed while I search for new Betas.
I also make use of google docs to write my fanfics so access to a chapter would be granted so we can work together using that and live discuss edits.
Use of FF.net beta system can be implemented as well if necessary.

I mostly need help with grammatical and syntax problemd where they appear (i.e punctuation errors, minor spelling issues or flow of a sentence or paragraph)
Help here isn't heavily required as I'm fairly good at catching my own mistakes but I'm not perfect and miss things sometimes.
Constructive critisism is also greatly welcomed.

If you are interested or know of anyone who has beta read before and might be interested,
either send me their way or them mine.
If it is you please let me know here or if you plan to PM me please let me know here.
(Since there are expiration dates on messages)

Writing samples could be provided to prove my own worth to any beta reader who is unsure of whether or not it is worth their time.
I am fairly literate though I admit my biggest weaknesses are comma splices and slight run-on sentences.
I also am prone to random moments where I blank out on a sentence and repeat a phrase twice...
Making it look something like this...
(It doesn't happen very often and I am usually am usually good at catching what I'm doing but sometimes I read it too quickly and don't see it ; ^ ; )

So you know the deets & how to reach me.
I also have a FF account where I will also be hosting my fanfic so if you want to reach me there I'm at
[6610521 | SunshineAmber]

Thank you very much for reading this!
Asano, Shizuka


UPDATE 1/10/16:
I have one beta but I would really love another so it balances out well.