I have a fanfic that could really use the critical eye of a Beta or two.
This is rated Mature future lemon scenes as well as violence and crude language.
Additional genres for this story would be AU Feudal Era, Tragedy & Angst
I have the first two chapters written and am working on the third.
This FF is planned to be a total of four only, however the remaining two will be fairly slow written
as my original idea for them has been adjusted and reconfigured.
I’m also hoping this could help me get my muse back for writing my previous drabbles series.

I make use of google docs to write my fanfics so access to a chapter would be granted
so we can work together using that and live discuss edits.
Use of FF.net beta system can be implemented as well if necessary.

I mostly need help with grammatical and syntax problems where they appear
(i.e punctuation errors, minor spelling issues or flow of a sentence or paragraph)
Help here isn't heavily required as I'm fairly good at catching my own mistakes
but I'm not perfect and miss things sometimes.
Constructive critisism is also greatly welcomed.
I admit my biggest weaknesses are comma splices and slight run-on sentences.
I also am prone to random moments where I blank out on a sentence and repeat a phrase twice...
Making it look something like this...
(It doesn't happen very often and I am usually am usually good at catching what I'm doing but sometimes I read it too quickly and don't see it ; ^ ; )

If you are interested or know of anyone who has beta read before and might be interested,
either send me their way or them mine.
If it is you please let me know here or if you plan to PM me please let me know here.
(Since there are expiration dates on messages)

So you know the deets & how to reach me.
I also have a FF account where I will also be hosting my fanfic so if you want to reach me there I'm at
[6610521 | SunshineAmber]

Thank you very much for reading this!
Asano, Shizuka