This review is from the chapter of The Void that I posted last night.
Reviewer: blackmidnight16
Review: Now, I am usually not a fan of first person in any sort of writing because it unevitably leads me to doubt the character; however, the way in which you utilize Kagome's perspective, is phenomenal. As a reader, we are given the opportunity to witness Kagome in her purest form. The plot is amazing and with this chapter in particular, I cannot wait for an update and made me wish for longer chapters! Suspense can be evil at times.
This is a great review, not only because it happens to be a good review, but also because the reviewer informs me that normally he/she would not like this POV, but they did enjoy it with this story. Explains why they enjoyed it. They mention something good about the story 'the plot is amazing' and also tell me where they would like to see me improve 'wish for longer chapters'. And I love the parting line of 'Suspense can be evil at times', anyone who's read my stories know I love leaving my readers with a cliffy and so this line just makes me smile.
