The eyes are hot and the shadowing is amazing!

I love this picture especially Sesshoumaru's fangs peeking out

I agree with Quiet Whisper. You did a great job on the faces. The part that I have a hard time figuring out is the lower half of the picture. I kind of had to stare at it a while to figure out what was going on. It sort of looks like a jumble. It might help to define where Kagome is and where Sesshomaru is because I'm not exactly sure how they are sitting and/or standing. This looks really nice so far though.