Kashi, I think the angle of his head is a little off. But I like the sense of movement in the sketch and the body is... rahr! *blinks, drools, wipes drool off chin*

Harumph! I think you have talent, very definitely, but you need to practice, practice, practice! And look at the section of tutorials in the Dokuga art gallery. Our best artists have done a number of tutorials showing how to do different things. You should look through them to see which can be of help to you. Nysrina is a wonder with textures; go to her profile page and look at her arts, they are amazing. And r0o is incredible. She has done some amazing arts that blow me away. If you study her work I am certain you will feel the same way. Amadeus leaves me open-mouthed with amazement. Rikayu creates works that I am convinced some from some wonderfully ethereal universe that only she can see. They have all done tutorials that I think are marvelous. Actually, I think that all of the tutorials are marvelous. Go there, learn what you can and don't be afraid to ask the artists for help. Our artists are wonderfully generous with helping others. Even if you aren't taking classes yet, you can still learn and Dokuga offers you a safe place to do that. And you are worth the time it takes to learn your craft and hone your skills. Go, you valuable girl, go!