I like the picture a lot, overall. But the wings are to fuzzy like fur and not defined like feathers. Your technique would make a wonderful MokaMoka (Sesshomaru fluff). Also the wings could be shaped a little differently. You eyes fallow the wings off the page. What I mean is, the picture is unbalanced. So you eye stray off the main point, Kagome. When you look at any artwork, you eyes should automatically circle the picture and stay on the main focal point, not fall off. I hope this helps. You have a great talent. I look forward to seeing more.

Beautiful, but can you tell me what the writing translates as

I love the wings most of all! The 'fuzzy' texture is gorgeous; reminds me of a baby owl :)
Overall, a very pretty piece.

Really stunning and unique! Great job!

the wings look so detailed