This is good^^ i want to read more so scurry hurry

I like it! I don't update much either...so I have no right to talk but I would appreciate an effort on your part to do so [again] just because I LOVE reading your writings and I feel my pleasure ends all too soon...anyhoo, this is gettign interesting!

-Dani.

Hey just wanted to say I like it so far, but it would be nice if it was longer...

i loved this story but can u make it longer and the next one in sesshomsrus pov? plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Ooh Yay! I'm so glad that you decided to make this into a longer story! I'm really enjoying it so far, and I'll be certain to keep a lookout for new chapters!

Hehehe that was funny. Poor Sesshomaru. hehe. I think you should make this one shot into a story :) please!

Awww...how cute. Will you be adding more to this story? I think that it would be worth a try.

You had just a few minor spelling and grammar errors but no big deal on that. Great job and keep up the good work. You're off to a good start. :)

No continuation this seems like a promising start.
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-Dani.

The consolation prize will be all the fun colors she'll turn when she wakes up!

i love it!
and i love how even in sleep,kagome knows how to work!
and sesshoumaru....i feel kinda sorry for him,its gonna hurt trying to get those tangles out!next chapter please!

i really liked it. sweet and very realistic. I also loved how you described kahome's sleeping habits! lol

Ireally liked this! About the only change I'd suggest is at the end when 'Variously, Sesshoumaru smashed the slight part of himself that said that he liked this a lot more then he was letting on.' The use of variously (as in off and on) doesn't really make sense to me. Did you mean visciously? The only way I can think of for you to make it better is to make it longer. I'd really have enjoyed reading Inuyasha's reaction when he arrived back at camp! This would make for a really good multi-chapter story, too if you were to explore the possibilities of Sesshoumaru's future battles against that part of himself that liked having Kagome snuggled up against him, and her reactions to an ever so slow change of attitude on his part. There's really a lot you could do with a start like this. Even just in terms of torturing Inuyasha lol.

Aww... This story is so sweet. I loved the way you portrayed Sesshoumaru's thoughts and the situation facing Kagome that forces her to take action. Is it possible to continue this story a bit longer? I would like to know what happens when Inuyasha discovers them in the morning. ^^ Anyways, keep up the great work and I hope I'll see other wonderful stories coming from you in the future! XD