| wait so kimi is still lady of the western coven or not? and wht about tht female? how can touga just cheat on her and bring the female AND the child to their home? .....
alaine- Sat 21 Jul 2007
| i cant believe he would cheat on his wife and bring another woman home and i think kag would be better off with them
al- Fri 13 Jul 2007
you've got time to bend it more,to make it more articulate.
so take your time,and don't worry.
it read fine.
nothing fancy and it was alright.
good luck.
| please write more!!!!!!!!!!!
angela- Fri 13 Jul 2007
u have 2 update ur story is good
elvira- Fri 13 Jul 2007
| so kagome is still a human miko...and seshomaru is a vampire?..cool...more chapters please!!!
update update update please... very good plot
whiteinu1- Thu 12 Jul 2007
| keep going ^_^
chibi-nova- Thu 12 Jul 2007
| -bows deeply- thanks so much for updating i didnt think you would ever update....^_^ mmm dont stress out over it im positive (big word thats sp right lol) that if you keep writing like you do you have nothing to worry about cause you write very well -pats back- haha wierdness well ~happy writing~ p.s.didnt know that they would do something like that (lady saya lord takuya sp?)
I love It! I LOVE it! I LOVE IT!!!!!!
TONI- Thu 12 Jul 2007
| I'M A LITTLE BIT CONFUSED
Crys777- Fri 29 Jun 2007
| I Love it. and I want more as soon as you can, I can't wat to know what happens.
Anonymous- Thu 28 Jun 2007
| Interesting and in my recollection an original starting point. I wonder how much skills they learned from each other while playing (perhaps utilizing the naturally volatile combination of their polar opposite energies) and whether Nazuna is truly gone entirely. For example, seeing adult good friends form bloodsister/brother bond might give the youngsters ideas not to mention the probable story of forming the Shikon as a last resort.
whiteinu1- Sun 24 Jun 2007
| keep going ^_^
whiteinu1- Sun 24 Jun 2007
| keep going ^_^
i would love to read more it a very good start please update soon thanks TTFN
Trice- Sat 23 Jun 2007
| I really enjoyed reading this first chapter. When I was reading I wished there was more. This story seems like it is going to be very entertaining and I can't wait to read more.
chibi-nova- Sat 23 Jun 2007
| AAA! wonderful start..i enjoyed it enjoyed it ALOT! lol if your stories are like this (written really well =^^=) i would love to hear more from you and this story ~happy writting~ could you send me an email for when you update it? its shoibhan318@hotmail.com appreciate it verry much
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