Ayuri- Sun 27 Apr 2008
That was HILARIOUS! And very well wriiten too. Great job!

Erneica B- Sun 27 Apr 2008
Wow this was so funny. would have been a very good story if it was longer. but i still loved it.

Kamorea Chan- Sun 20 Apr 2008
i love it i hope to read some more from ya in the future

Nikki-kins- Sun 09 Mar 2008
goddamn, i wish sesshoumaru would scratch my itch ; 3;

Angel B.- Sun 27 Jan 2008
hello wanted to send a review ooo i loved the story it was funny and romantic oh i loved it thanks for the great story bye :-D angel b

piratequeen0405- Fri 25 Jan 2008
I read the flea part of this ages ago and loved it. Glad to read the rest--hilarious and sexy. Congrats on your nomination!

Alandrias- Thu 24 Jan 2008
*giggles wildly* I LOVE IT!!!!!

Kagome357- Thu 24 Jan 2008
*throwing up the devil horns*

I read this on ff.net and it's absolutely awesome! Your nomination is well deserved! Congrats on a well done story...good luck with the awards.

Tainted Sins- Thu 24 Jan 2008
I loved it. I'll have to read your other stories, because this one was just- this was your FIRST lemon?
Amazing.
Continue writing, please! ^^

madmiko- Fri 11 Jan 2008
That was really enjoyable! I loved the continuing device of the itching. I was glad to see that no sweeping declarations of love were made for once. I think that would have spoiled it. But you certainly left the door open so we can imagine what may come to be in the future. Great job!! ^_^

Priestess Skye- Tue 01 Jan 2008
oh all of these were very good. Loved the lemon, well done. makes me jealous simply because I find it extremely difficult to write one and yours looked as if it came naturally, kudos.

lady_myth- Thu 29 Nov 2007
Nicely done.

snowbird- Thu 22 Nov 2007
I loved it!. Soooooo funny. Especially the first chapter. I laughed so hard, I was pounding on my desk to catch my breath. My little puppy dog thought something was wrong with me. Too bad it had to stop at 3 chapters. if you ever get the urge to continue it, could you e-mail me an alert? I do believe it would make for an interesting and cute story that would be popular with your fans.

Megan Consoer- Thu 08 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

DreamingPisces- Sat 27 Oct 2007
This was exalent! I really enjoyed it hard to believe it was your first time writing a lemon!

squirrell a.k.a megan- Thu 25 Oct 2007
you should write a second story that continues this one!it was so good. i couldn't stop reading till i finished it. for your fist lemon you did a pretty good job.(i can soooo beilve the fact that you blushed.)

deviousauthoress1- Thu 18 Oct 2007
Wow! You made me itchy! Great story, I loved it.

sharilynn- Thu 18 Oct 2007
aewwww,sharilynn sitting in a classroom beside iloveprettysilerhair.
sharilyn***(nudge nudge)what you writing
iloveprettysilverhair****nothing
sharilyn****umm yeah sure.
sorry i love doing that lol,this is still good please keep writing
Sharilynn

tilayha- Thu 18 Oct 2007
i am sitting here at 5:45am and watching inuyasha's second airing of the night. its the episode called 'tetsusaiga and tenseiga'. Sesshoumaru is in this episode and it was a wonderful back drop for my imagination as images of him scratching and complaining filter through my mind. i kinda wish inu would have caught them in the act though. i do however like the way you left the story open for more.
i am looking forward to more chapters and if not for this one then from new fics.
well done
tilayha

kiki- Wed 17 Oct 2007
why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well if you are going to end it please make another storie please or i will cry

reina- Wed 17 Oct 2007
wonderful short story, i think you could even do a sequel :]

Black barbie- Wed 17 Oct 2007
First lemon huh hmm nice whoa it wuz gud u should keep writin lemons it wuz really good n da story wuz funny 2 plez keep up da good work black barbie

myukho_jenna19- Wed 17 Oct 2007
Very cool fic! I like the way it progressed along the 3 chapters. Great job!

Ana- Wed 17 Oct 2007
Aw, that was a cute open ending ^_^

Totally love it! Man, I sooo wouldn't mind having situations like that everyday if you've got one hot taiyoukai to take care of it for you ^_^

I hope you continue to write more of your fics! Bye!!

Jean- Wed 17 Oct 2007
I think you did very well writing a realistic spontaneous sexual encounter.

v1cky84- Wed 17 Oct 2007
Awww man...I hope this is not the last chapter. I would love to read more, i.e. Sess making Kagome his wife/mate and Inuyasha finding out what has happened between the two of them. I hope you'll continue this story. please please please......

inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter

inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter

inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter

inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter

Kamorea Chan- Tue 09 Oct 2007
i love it very good concept. cant wait for more.

FlufflyAngel- Mon 08 Oct 2007
OMG that was so funny you HAVE to write another chapter for it it just to good to stop now

Sessygurl- Sun 07 Oct 2007
That was incredible! Keep up the great work! I cant wait for their next encounter.

Sarah- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Hmm I'm asking for more MUST HAVE MORE. Mwuahahahahcough cough anyways I think this chapter was ... fun hehehe

sharilynn- Sun 07 Oct 2007
wow this is like eally funny,the most in the beginning,but i have to emet it is good please keep writing more.
Sharilynn

v1cky84- Sun 07 Oct 2007
I love it love it love it. This story makes me laugh so hard. I hope you'll continue the story, I'd definitely read it.

Kayla C.- Sat 06 Oct 2007
That was awesome!!! But I am kinda itchy now. How dare they do that to his person!! HAHA!!!!

DreamingPisces- Thu 04 Oct 2007
this was really cute! just reading it kinda made me itch! lol great job!

lex1621- Wed 03 Oct 2007
oh, please tell me your continuing this story!!!! It's absolutely hilarious. If you do continue could you put me on an update list please?

Katie33h- Wed 03 Oct 2007
That was cute and funny. You did a good job of keeping Seshsomaru in character for something do out of character. Kudos !

inugoddesschild- Wed 03 Oct 2007
I sooo loved it....could u make a story out of it...that would be so halarious when inu finds out about their bath....

sharilynn- Wed 03 Oct 2007
well this is a first chapter and stunning i believe you should write more,(wink wink) lol.
Sharilynn

Calix of Heaven- Wed 03 Oct 2007
Rolling on the floor laughing, that was good. What a way to take on a challenge, fantastic job. If you do feel like continuing this story I would gladly read it.

kotainuchan- Wed 03 Oct 2007
haha that was really cute.....I'm kinda itchy now though.

hellspixie18- Wed 03 Oct 2007
loved it!!! does it have to be a one-shot? cause I want more of this story!

Tenshi no Kami- Wed 03 Oct 2007
OMG!!!!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!! I don't care what you put in it...just continue it please!!!

MorningStar- Wed 03 Oct 2007
i loved it! if you ever find yourself wanting to write more of this i would be all too happy to read it!

Sessygurl- Tue 02 Oct 2007
That was great! Keep going!

Satsukifujin- Tue 02 Oct 2007
OMG! That was awsome! ^.^ I can honestly say that you dominated that challenge! Keep it up!

serasvictoria666- Tue 02 Oct 2007
That was awesome! I loved it! ^-^

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