i love it i hope to read some more from ya in the future
Nikki-kins- Sun 09 Mar 2008
goddamn, i wish sesshoumaru would scratch my itch ; 3;
Angel B.- Sun 27 Jan 2008
hello wanted to send a review ooo i loved the story it was funny and romantic oh i loved it thanks for the great story bye :-D angel b
piratequeen0405- Fri 25 Jan 2008
I read the flea part of this ages ago and loved it. Glad to read the rest--hilarious and sexy. Congrats on your nomination!
*giggles wildly* I LOVE IT!!!!!
*throwing up the devil horns*
I read this on ff.net and it's absolutely awesome! Your nomination is well deserved! Congrats on a well done story...good luck with the awards.
I loved it. I'll have to read your other stories, because this one was just- this was your FIRST lemon?
Amazing.
Continue writing, please! ^^
madmiko- Fri 11 Jan 2008
That was really enjoyable! I loved the continuing device of the itching. I was glad to see that no sweeping declarations of love were made for once. I think that would have spoiled it. But you certainly left the door open so we can imagine what may come to be in the future. Great job!! ^_^
oh all of these were very good. Loved the lemon, well done. makes me jealous simply because I find it extremely difficult to write one and yours looked as if it came naturally, kudos.
Nicely done.
snowbird- Thu 22 Nov 2007
I loved it!. Soooooo funny. Especially the first chapter. I laughed so hard, I was pounding on my desk to catch my breath. My little puppy dog thought something was wrong with me. Too bad it had to stop at 3 chapters. if you ever get the urge to continue it, could you e-mail me an alert? I do believe it would make for an interesting and cute story that would be popular with your fans.
Megan Consoer- Thu 08 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
DreamingPisces- Sat 27 Oct 2007
This was exalent! I really enjoyed it hard to believe it was your first time writing a lemon!
squirrell a.k.a megan- Thu 25 Oct 2007
you should write a second story that continues this one!it was so good. i couldn't stop reading till i finished it. for your fist lemon you did a pretty good job.(i can soooo beilve the fact that you blushed.)
deviousauthoress1- Thu 18 Oct 2007
Wow! You made me itchy! Great story, I loved it.
sharilynn- Thu 18 Oct 2007
aewwww,sharilynn sitting in a classroom beside iloveprettysilerhair.
sharilyn***(nudge nudge)what you writing
iloveprettysilverhair****nothing
sharilyn****umm yeah sure.
sorry i love doing that lol,this is still good please keep writing
Sharilynn
i am sitting here at 5:45am and watching inuyasha's second airing of the night. its the episode called 'tetsusaiga and tenseiga'. Sesshoumaru is in this episode and it was a wonderful back drop for my imagination as images of him scratching and complaining filter through my mind. i kinda wish inu would have caught them in the act though. i do however like the way you left the story open for more.
i am looking forward to more chapters and if not for this one then from new fics.
well done
tilayha
kiki- Wed 17 Oct 2007
why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well if you are going to end it please make another storie please or i will cry
reina- Wed 17 Oct 2007
wonderful short story, i think you could even do a sequel :]
Black barbie- Wed 17 Oct 2007
First lemon huh hmm nice whoa it wuz gud u should keep writin lemons it wuz really good n da story wuz funny 2 plez keep up da good work black barbie
Very cool fic! I like the way it progressed along the 3 chapters. Great job!
Ana- Wed 17 Oct 2007
Aw, that was a cute open ending ^_^
Totally love it! Man, I sooo wouldn't mind having situations like that everyday if you've got one hot taiyoukai to take care of it for you ^_^
I hope you continue to write more of your fics! Bye!!
Jean- Wed 17 Oct 2007
I think you did very well writing a realistic spontaneous sexual encounter.
Awww man...I hope this is not the last chapter. I would love to read more, i.e. Sess making Kagome his wife/mate and Inuyasha finding out what has happened between the two of them. I hope you'll continue this story. please please please......
inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter
inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter
inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter
inu-chick- Wed 17 Oct 2007
i love your story i realy mmean it ............but....i can't wate to read the next chapter
i love it very good concept. cant wait for more.
FlufflyAngel- Mon 08 Oct 2007
OMG that was so funny you HAVE to write another chapter for it it just to good to stop now
Sessygurl- Sun 07 Oct 2007
That was incredible! Keep up the great work! I cant wait for their next encounter.
Sarah- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Hmm I'm asking for more MUST HAVE MORE. Mwuahahahahcough cough anyways I think this chapter was ... fun hehehe
sharilynn- Sun 07 Oct 2007
wow this is like eally funny,the most in the beginning,but i have to emet it is good please keep writing more.
Sharilynn
I love it love it love it. This story makes me laugh so hard. I hope you'll continue the story, I'd definitely read it.
Kayla C.- Sat 06 Oct 2007
That was awesome!!! But I am kinda itchy now. How dare they do that to his person!! HAHA!!!!
DreamingPisces- Thu 04 Oct 2007
this was really cute! just reading it kinda made me itch! lol great job!
oh, please tell me your continuing this story!!!! It's absolutely hilarious. If you do continue could you put me on an update list please?
Katie33h- Wed 03 Oct 2007
That was cute and funny. You did a good job of keeping Seshsomaru in character for something do out of character. Kudos !
inugoddesschild- Wed 03 Oct 2007
I sooo loved it....could u make a story out of it...that would be so halarious when inu finds out about their bath....
sharilynn- Wed 03 Oct 2007
well this is a first chapter and stunning i believe you should write more,(wink wink) lol.
Sharilynn
Calix of Heaven- Wed 03 Oct 2007
Rolling on the floor laughing, that was good. What a way to take on a challenge, fantastic job. If you do feel like continuing this story I would gladly read it.
kotainuchan- Wed 03 Oct 2007
haha that was really cute.....I'm kinda itchy now though.
loved it!!! does it have to be a one-shot? cause I want more of this story!
Tenshi no Kami- Wed 03 Oct 2007
OMG!!!!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!! I don't care what you put in it...just continue it please!!!
i loved it! if you ever find yourself wanting to write more of this i would be all too happy to read it!
Sessygurl- Tue 02 Oct 2007
That was great! Keep going!
Satsukifujin- Tue 02 Oct 2007
OMG! That was awsome! ^.^ I can honestly say that you dominated that challenge! Keep it up!
serasvictoria666- Tue 02 Oct 2007
That was awesome! I loved it! ^-^
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