I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

damn that was good be sure to finish
sure did piss me off when you stopped at the good part
love your humor

i am confused here...you leave it with Tama or whats-his-name saying 'Good Morning' and then you say that its complete!? what happens! what does sesshy do when the feline lord invades them in their peaceful moment? what will kags surogent father do? how will the other youkai deal with this?
it isn't nice to say something is complete when it does not look complete! complete is where they die/they live happily ever after/ or they have a one time, season caused sex scean! not they have sex, sleep, having fallen in love, are mates, and a guy who was going to be her mate walks in not knowing its her, and says 'Good Morning' to taunt her mate!
That is not an ending! and you have yet to make a sequel!
PLease, for the good of us all, up-date and finsih this damn sotry! also, try to put spaces between a few words...i noticed how you were puttingthemtogether ---like that...lol, not loling at you, but at my self...nm...
well...TTFN!
joanne