You're killing me here!!

Update soon!

OMG!!! THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!

So the prist´s daughter was terrified/inlove of Nah Ra kUh?!¿!?!¿!?! Why???????? whyyyyyyyyyyyy?¿?¿? Need.to.know.more!!! :D

And I cant WAIT for the sequel of Precious Blood!!! :D Yaaaaaay!

Love love love this story and this chapter. I see so much possibility from this last update, Kagome just trapped part of Lyka's spirit inside her head. I think the next step will be she has to purge that part of Lyka. hehehe then she just needs to figure out how to do it to someone else. Eventually Sesshomaru is going to find out and I can't wait until that happens. Hmmm but if kagome keeps feeding Nah Rah Ku (I love how you broke up his name) then it will be harder to get rid of him. Oh the predicament. And how exactly did he no that they were down there? Was it originally the theif that followed them? It would really explain why Sesshomaru was still sleep tousled. Gah I have to go back and read this again. I can't wait for the next update.

As much as I loved that one shot, Can't it wait :( this is so engrossing, I can barely handle the wait between chapters. OOH the suspense and thrills. If you start another work and get busy with that, I'll surely die of suspense *dramatic swoon*!! -le sigh- But the waits are very much worhth it. I simply love this story!!

IS GOOD!

It just keeps getting better, and better! It almost feels like forever since you've last updated, but I guess that's because I'm obsessed with the story and I wish I can read non-stop.

:) I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, and all the many more that will come. Excellent work!

okay, so its taken me forever to finally get a review to you and I'm so sorry. I know I said a long time ago, i'd be sending you one. My own story has kinda gotten away from me, and my daughter... *sigh* she's a handful. Anyways, on with the review.

I'm absolutely in love with this story, as you are already well aware... I did threaten to beat you if you took it down, afterall. lol!

I'm actually a little pissy with myself, because your story reflects one of my own little plot bunnies, that I've neglected to getting around to write. I think yours is far better than where mine would have gone, so it eases my frustrations with myself. I love how original your story is... and really its so GOOD that it makes me wonder why it hasn't been done before!

And you are so creative too... like how you pull in Sesshomaru's use of "this sesshomaru." Its used in a different tense, but the effect is the exact same as canon!

And OMG I'm in love with what you are doing with "Na Ra Ku" I'm sick, I know - but I love Naraku and find him uber sexy. I can't help myself! And you've pulled him in to the story in a way that I think even die hard k/s shippers can appreciate. Its almost like Naraku is Sesshomaru's beast. The way you write it, its as though Naraku has become a part of Sesshomaru and vise versa... they are no longer exclusively 2 entities, but neither are they the same. I say this because TO ME it seems that Naraku is effected by Sesshomaru in some ways. For example: He clearly favors Kagome, quite possibly because Sesshomaru's own affections have Naraku paying close attention to her for curiosities sake. Also, he is still the clever and manipulative personality he is in canon, and yet he seems bound to be more honorable to his word (even if its meaning is intentionally a little twisted) just as Sesshomaru is a man/demon of honor. Perhaps being united gives them some characteristics of the other? If so, I wonder in what ways Sesshomaru might begin to show some of Naraku's traits. (Maybe he'll become more bold in his demonstrative regard for Kagome, or care less for the propriety of not getting involved with a student, or he'll be more motivated by the instinctive drive to claim a mate - and I personally think humans have this instinct as well. I dont believe monogamy is NATURAL for us, I think its a conditioned social behavior. Being able to achieve monogomy - being able to rise above our instincts, is what seperates us from animals.) 

That desire to mate, while I would imagine it as focused on Kagome, may lead him to be a more sexual being which would draw in even MORE females. He may begin to respond unintentionally to some of the subtle sexual overatures. This might put a riff between Kagome and Sesshomaru, which would be even harder for her because she'd still be foreced into contact with him because of Naraku. She'd have to watch him respond to other women, which as she grows further in love with him, will become more and more painful. Just a pondering.

I also ponder over many other possibilities... The influence Sesshomaru's personality has on Naraku (if I'm interpreting the way you are writing, correctly that is) makes me wonder if a romance might eventually develope between Naraku and Kagome as well. Will Sesshomaru and Naraku be in danger of merging into one if they cannot seperate, or will one overpower the other, or will they remain two seperate entities? I also wonder if at some point Sesshomaru might become concious of what is going on while Naraku is in physical control of his body. If so what will he think of Kagomes interaction with the demon in him? Will he be moved by her intent to protect him and his career? Will he be ashamed that his body has violated her (even though she is a willing party, she was manipulated in to those situations with the demon, and as an honorable man he may feel guilty for it even though it was not directly him manipulating her or touching her) OR will he feel as though Kagome has in some way violated HIM by engaging in activities with her person that he was not a consiously willing party to? I can see how any or all of these might be the case.

Its been refressing to read that there may be some potential for great powers within Kagome. You haven't turned her in to this amazingly powerful force, but you leave it open to the fact that Kagome may very well have an unlimited reserve of untapped spiritual potential.

Your ability to combine canon with your own special interpretation makes it all so new and exciting, but also a comforting sense of familiarity. Its fun to read and pick up on the areas where you've chosen to either deviate or maintain the integrity of the canon universe. How you go about keeping those canon details is SO original though...

And your limes... oh. my. god. It has been ages sense I've read a lemon or lime that had me chewing my nails. And its always a new and unique setting or situation. And the dialogue.... SO STEAMY! Lemons and Limes NEED good dialogue. Not too much, and certainly not "ooh ahhh. YES!" pft.... I'm always so curious to see what naughty situation Kagome is going to stumble in to. It keeps me on toes, because you never know when Naraku will choose to pop up. So far he's been cautious of emerging during the day and around others, but its not a given that he wont challenge those bounds eventually as he grows bolder, stronger, and further craves time with Kagome.

I also much give you my gratitude for your regular updates. It is a huge pet peeve of mine when authors randomely update. I dont mean that they update EVERY week on thursday, what I mean is when authors update whenever they feel like it and are otherwise bored. It questions the authors dedication to their own creation. Updating every couple of weeks or at month intervals here and there.... thats not a problem. Its just when you never know if an author actually plans to finish a story that drives me crazy... far too many good abandoned stories out there :( So thank you!

Oh and I'm sorry if this wasnt a very organized review.... I just had SO many thoughts and they all just kinda came out when they wanted. Hope I didn't overwhelm you... and I hope you dont take my ponderings as my subtle way of suggesting the plot to you. I'm just thinking aloud. I appreciate when reviews offer thoughts and questions about the story, because it helps me know if I'm being ambiguous enough in places and obvious enough in places. I like to see what people are interpreting from what I write. Are they asking the questions I want them to? that sort of thing. So dont feel like I'm trying to influence you in any way, please! And as ALWAYS if there are comments, ideas, questions, you would like to/or are willing to address with me, PM me or comment on my wall... I'd love to hear from you!

Wow, deep and mischevious. I really like how the story is progressing. Can't wait for more.

Gah! I am just in love with your writing style! This was a great update! I was really looking forward to it!! And did I mention how awesome you are? :p Keep up the awesome work (not that you really even need to try :P)

So I really really like this story so far! I really think you have great talent and I really enjoy your work!

So keep up the awesome work!

*WHISTLE*

<3

Takes a whole new perspective to water conservation...hmm...explicitly wicked yet haunting with the voices and her finding the body. This story just keeps getting better and better.

I am literally counting down minutes for you're updates

i know you just updated, (i mean, i didn't even get an e-mail yet)

but please update sooon!!!!!!!!

Sesshomaru playing the part of Indiana Jones.  Now there's something to think about!  Awesome action/suspense sequence!  You have an amazing imagination, and your writing is perfect! 

Perfect plotting!  You haven't missed a beat yet.

A gem of a story pimped to me by Miss Itsy.

You've got me questioning everything, from why Kagome wants to be an archeologist to what the heck she could be feeling in the temple. And somehow I have the feeling Sess knows something... >.> or I'm just paranoid. Anyway, I love it! Thank you for sharing your vision with us.

Ooooh.  Exciting.  I love the mixing of cultures you have going on here.  It's wonderful.

Omg, ooooh.  So cool.  *continues reading because she's rather riveted*

Sweeeetttt.  XD