Oh and was r0o's translated name Tourou? I don't actually know her name so I'm just going to make a blind guess :P
I am not gonna lie, I did pout when I read that this was bringing to an end your updating bombs. I figured it would be fine but when I got to the part where they were leaving Totosai's, I glanced over at the scroll bar and realized I only had a little bit left and the chapter was over. I had an internal fit since I couldn't throw a normal one, my actual body threw a fit for me, a knot in my chest and angered breathing. But after two seconds I went on about reading, lamenting the fact that there wasn't another chapter to be read. I did enjoy Izaiyoi. Alot. Her antics were so funny, cute too if I stop and think about it. I liked the explanation given by Sesshoumaru about Izaiyoi's taste and loyalty to HER stores and not to fashion's designated stores that are changing all the time. I was glad to see a bit of Sesshoumaru in this, however short, I was beginning to feel he wouldn't be there. Inuyasha's actions are quickly seeming to mirror that of a cheating man, and the parent's ire at him seems to reinforce that he is doing wrong and they do not approve. But, looks can be decieving so I will just have to see, which is kind of hard at the moment because there isn't another chapter........... Moving on, those few moments of tension, at the words "Looks can be decieving", I wondered what that was about, whether they knew about her...encounter with Sesshoumaru or was there something else. I wondered again about other moments of tension and what they all meant. My mind is so attuned to this, I haven't been reading other stories without stray thoughts about this story butting in. I feel so bad. I think I should stop rambling now... I seem to do that in my reviews to your story. I apologize.
I'll be waiting, and if a week goes by without an update I'll be back to start begging again.
--Kaminoko
Zyren (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Dec 2011
I usually don't review because I'm pathetically lazy and normally too caught up reading to do so but hey it's the holidays right? This is absolutely amazing. I've seen this premise before but certianly not so well executed. Your ability to set the scene and encite feeling/emotion without being overly descriptive is quite remarkable. I can't wait to see how the story will progress. Happy holidays!
tazsmith (Chapter 5) - Mon 26 Dec 2011
I really love this story.. its totally awesome and I can't wait to see how it ends!! I hope u had/have awesome holidays and I thank you for the present- even tho its for every1!
5stars <3 it!
Maribel mota (Chapter 5) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
Sorry about that, but i drinking wine, so you. Could imagine I a litte inebriated so, some of the stuff you are
Writen I just happen to lived with my ex.... After awhile he soparanoid that we brake up ,it was good at the time but
If you ask if I doing it again my answer is no... No. Not all people are mature enough to survive after that kind
Of relation ..... So I going to wait for the next chapter to see where this led to.....good luck.
We want to live by each other's happiness, not by each other's misery.
i will give you c0okies if you let miroku come home to his girl and kagoe in panties having a drunken pillow fight =x
*clicks button* oh yus this was a good update!* *totally stalking yoru ficcies!
@_@ 0o0o0o this is wow
Soooo....I thin I have seriously become addicted to your writings. This I so hot I'm damn near on fire over here!!! Please keep up the speedy updates!!!!
OMG!! This is one hell of a hot Christmas Prezzie!!! I absolutely love it!! As for Cheating on inuyasha LOL (I absolutely don't believe in it or condone it either) he'd have to actually be around for more than 30 seconds for her to be cheating on him!! Something tells me he's been cheating on her for years and is currently doing it again. Sesshoumaru and Kagome have met there match in each other and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
Selazul (Chapter 5) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
Please please please do update soon >_< the storyline still contains that wonderful spark of originality !!!!
Anon (Chapter 4) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
I just wanted to quickly review and say that this is really great, Hatter. I really love the whole SxK dynamic. Can't wait to read the next chapter (now lol)
Nice job and keep it up!
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