You are sooooo amazing, Hatter! Even when you're writing smut fic you still capture the emotions and dynamics of the characters. This story turned out to be a lot deeper than I expected, a pleasant surprise. Your depictions of the human condition are both wonderful and brutal in their honesty. I would comment about what I want to happen to Inuyasha, but we discussed that in chat already haha.
Impatiently waiting for the next,
QuothTheDragon
This is a...hard read for me and not b/c of the kink. It's hard to swallow Kagome, kind hearted gentle Kagome, willing to have affair with someone...when it's not really necessary. She could always just break off the freaking engagment, it's not like she's married or has kids by him, (at the rate things are going, she's going end up with some by his brother though) he's always away anyway. One phone call and then some tears and spectacular make up sex with Sesshomaru, why is that so hard?! I just can't stomach someone willing do this to another person especially when nothing is tying them together but a farce of an engagment and some feelings that obviously are not that strong if you are willing to do all these things with his..brother. Not a random stranger or some dude she met, but his half brother. I LOVE this story, so I'm biting at the bit to keep going just so I can see them break it off. For the love of God, do not put them through a farce of marriage before this ends, end it please, from the bottom of heart, end it before I die from guilt and nausea!!!!!
This is an amazing story! I can't wait to see where you'll be taking this story next! Your powers of smut creativity are endless lady!
Nistera (Chapter 9) - Fri 13 Jan 2012
Genius! I've read what's been posted so far in just the last hour or so, and I was quite heartbroken when there wasn't a "next chapter" button, :(. I'll be waiting for more, and soon (especially with all your other awesome and beautiful stories)!
P.S. Your ability to describe a character's transition from one state of existence to another is uncanny and seems/is real (in the sense that it is genuine, authentic, and true-to-form for the character in question, especially among whatever situations/circumstances they are grounded in).
Love!
hopuchan (Chapter 9) - Fri 13 Jan 2012
I love this story so far. I'm dying to know what Inuyasha's been up to if he's not simply cheating on Kags. Also, you write sex scenes well. They're realistic and honest (and hot!); the emotions always come across very genuine.
Well first off I hope you're feeling better!!! Secondly, All I can say is HOT! HOT! HOT!! Ths story is wickedly decilious! Temptations abound and Kagome is finally allowing herself to complete fantasies she's had for years and fantasies she dind't know she had!! Awesome job!
Selazul (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Jan 2012
Thrilling chapter. Idk I think your going to pursuade a trek of followers to start branching out and experimenting ;)
As a bisexual female I do not care to see too males go at it, but two girls is really hot and you executed Sango and Kagome's scene perfectly! Regarding the two gay guys I would just as soon skip the part but it's not because there's anything wrong with the writing just my personal preference. As for if it was hot or not... I have no idea XD
this chapter was awesome!
you did a great job, and I can't wait for the next update!!
Girl on girl is definately not my thing.. but it was stilll pretty hot. the man sex was even hotter. while most girls don't come out and say it.. watching two guys is to girls as two lesbians is to guys... especially when it's rough.. because then it's like they are real men and not the sissies many people seem to associate with the gay bois..
Loved the cameo. :D and the Areola drink name made me almost choke.. from laughing so hard.
Hopefully you will do more man on man smex later.. especially when the boys find out the girls loved watching it.. >.>
Can't wait til Kagome is less confused about what's going on.. it really seems like everything was a setup to get the two of them involved..
Invisible (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Jan 2012
Look, I gotta say I've been following your story avidly, and the sange/kagome thing? Hot. Thanks for fulfilling lots of my hentai needs all in one <3
Sarah (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Jan 2012
well...
That was an interesting way to wake up this morning. I should know that it would make more sense to wait to read such stories when I had time to fully enjoy the feelings evoked. Not that I am complaining...I am just going to be spending the entire day squirming, and waiting for my boyfriend.
As for the bit about being squeamish about the Kagome and Sango bits, DON'T BE! I think you are handling it deliciously. This story is about Kagome's journy into her own sexuality. She simply appears to have more than one person willing to show her some options. No harm in that! I am actually hoping more characters pop in and help her out.
I do have one question though...Sesshoumaru was with Miroku? When Sango had Kagome call Sesshoumaru and ask for permission to enjoy each other, he said that Miroku agreed with the terms as well. To me it seemed as if you were implying that they were together at the time. Or did they discuss "the rules" ahead of time?? Or am I getting ahead of myself, and should simply go along for the ride???
WOW! That was rather intense! Definitely want to see more of it...mroe Sango/Kagome and more male/male....was definitely delicious.
I can't even express in words how mucn I love this story. I've been lurking for a while, but with this last chapter I just had to review. I loved, loved, loved the Sango/Kagome thing. Loved it. I loved that Sango told Kagome to ask Sess if she could play with her. It was all so well done, and so accurate for a lot of D/s type relationships. Basically this story rocks my world. As do you.
Jaru Javelle (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Jan 2012
You are so very gentle in introducing different types of sex. On one hand, I want to be slapped in the face with it, but on the other, it's like a slow building of something that makes me want to be naughty (in a good way) without already feeling naughty (in a bad way). You are a terrific writer. I look forward to your next chapter and how you unfold Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship, as well as rebirth Kagome and Sango's.
ap (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Jan 2012
i feel like it's time for her to finally break up with inuyasha- she's definitely attached to sess and seeing new options. ;)
wonderful as always!!
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