Its been like...2 days....I need you to post more....
Incredibly angsty, but incredibly well done!!! I love the level of detail, the emotions, the way things shifted - subtly at first, then sharper. One can almost see the inevitable coming, what with Inuyasha being such a prick and Sesshoumaru already half-gone over her... but I will greatly look forward to the smex and smut that you tease us with while voyaging into that train wreck! Wait... DOES one 'voyage' into a train wreck?? Nevermind... late at night and not thinking well. Anyway, NICELY DONE!
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~~me~~
I am truly puzzled as of Inuyasha's whereabouts during his engagement party, but at the end, it'll be Sesshomaru that gets Kagome. I'm all good on following that. Lol. As to your comment that some of the reviewers are half-correct, makes me even more curious as to what Inuyasha is doing. Hehehe...can't wait to see what happens next. The bondage part was good. You detailed Kagome and Sesshomaru's feelings and thoughts perfectly well.
This is wonderful, absolutely delicious, can't wait for more. I absolutely adore how cute Kagome is and how dominant Sesshoumaru is without being vicious or rudely commanding.
| Okay, I'm finally caught up. And I wish I wasn't, because now there's nothing more to read! I'm going to go pout in the corner now. lol. Anyways, its fabulous. Completely and utterly fabulous. You're quite gifted at writing smut and have stirred a desire in me to finish my ultra smutty one shot I've been playing with. It's bondage, as well, actually, which might be why this chapter makes me want to get it back out. Too bad I hate my laptop. Good news is, I have Spaceship Awesome, my trusty iPad, wich I use for everything except design work and writing.
| Okay, I'm fairly certain Torou is rOo. Yes?
The chapter was fun, but I kind of wish we'd get a bit of Sesshomarus thoughts mixed in. I'm sure he was having a million different kinky thoughts putting those metal cuffs on Kags, especially the collar/choker. (And as a Sub, I can appreciate just how mad sexy it would bento have your Dom dress you up like that.)
sugar0o being to lazy to log in~! (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
that was so sexy! i'm going to have to infect you with gm's more often!
| I don't normally write reviews until I catch up to the last posted chapter to a fic. But when you mentioned being a fellow Pagan, well, I had to give you a belated Yule gift! this is a mad sexy fic and your writing is the type that manages to draw the readerin and hold them hostage. I'm currently both bemoaning the dwindling battery on my iPad and being grateful I only have 47 minutes of battery life left, because otherwise I'd never get any sleep tonight, staying up to read instead! It's a great story so far, though I'm holding my breathe that she'll dump Inuyasha any second now.
Hope you had a fabulous holiday season! I got to spend an entire evening surrounded by my entire family for the first time 9+ years so my holidays were beyond awesome.
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. I can't get enough. I can't wait until the next chapter. Has inuyahsa decided he likes men better then women?
Selazul (Chapter 7) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Dear god why did you have toopisthotonos at 6 in the freaking morning!?!? I had to wait ALL day to get off work and read this @.@ sheer torture. I demand retributions in the form of another chapter... No TWO chapters >_> ( btw amazing chapter I got chills as it progressed )
OMG!! Absolutely loved this!!! Happy! Happy New year to you too! thank you for starting the New Year off with a terrific installment of this story! Maybe Inuyasha has finally come to understand that he can't be the male she needs, that he can't give her what she needs! She needs to be strong all the time dealing with children and being a surgeon. What she needs so badly is for someone to be strong for her when she desperately needs it. Someone to be her support system, her safe harbor in an endless storm. (don't we all in one way or another) I hope that Sesshoumaru realizes that he's Kagome's and she's his! As always beautifully told.
Avidreader (Chapter 7) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
LOVE this story - very well written and detailed without going overboard. I especially like the approach that Kagome is NOT clumsy, stupid and forgetful. I am also thankful that Izayoi was included as one of the characters and is very well written as well.
Inuyasha...I'm happy he's distracted and at first I thought it was because he was having an affair...but the calls that come and the excuse he is using every time leads me to believe he's an addict. Could be using the business as a cover up, but I'm thinking he's into the service introducted in the beginning chapter, but it's possible he's into other addictions as well.
Sessygurl (Chapter 7) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Inuyasha is a little too close to the fellas...if you know what I mean. I also think that Kagome and Sesshomaru need to admit to their true feelings or its going to be like Touga and Sesshoumarus mother. The more and more they are together sex or not they are becoming attached. I guess we will have to wait and see.
you are teh evils!!!!
Calophi (Chapter 7) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Oh, I think he's cheating a bit. I think he has a bit of the ghey. It'd explain his aversion to eating pussy and why he feels so disturbed lately and so unattentive towards his fiance. :)
tazsmith (Chapter 6) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
I think that this is the best story I've read for quite some time. Your writing is very detailed- without being boring- and your story itself is very interesting. I eagerly await an update. I hope your writing muse is keeping you busy:)
| I'm loving this fic.
I have the funniest feeling that Inuyasha fling might have been/be Koga or Kikyo, more Koga though.
Can't wait to read more ^_^
Well, it's a good thing that you are getting confident, because you are popping out fantastic stories! Haha. ( ;
Hatter, I'm addicted to your writing. it doesn't matter what the setting is, if I see it is something you've written, I grab a glass of wine and dig in. That said, I gotta say I needed a cold shower after reading your chapters. Wowsa, girl, you got talent for writing hot stuff without going overboard. <fans self> Wow.
What is truly delightful about your writing, and this story in particular, is that while there is plenty of saucy goodness (oh yes! and I'm definitely looking forward to more) you write interesting characters and the story itself is good even without the yummy naughty bits. Cannot wait for the next chapter! You have me guessing about Inu Yasha's moodiness/reluctance to be with Kagome after his own fantasy - is he hitting it off with Kouga somewhere? <that's just wishful thinking on my part, lol!> Anyway, keep going, love your stuff!
Selazul (Chapter 6) - Mon 26 Dec 2011
I fully encourage you to continue updating like that every 24 hours :) its nice to come home from work and read your updates :). I keep waiting for Inu to get his ~stds. Lol
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