Hello,
I absolutely love this story!!! I don't know how many times I have already read this ;)
The kids are so adorable, especially Kazue and Masahiro!!! I love the interaction between Kagome and the kids, they are groing with time into a real family. Hopefully Kagome will have more trust in Sesshoumaru now and will not attempt to leave again...I was nearly crying ... the way you let them act with the howls and yipps was so realistic!!!
I find it also really interesting that Kazue has the beast of the Inu no Taisho and would really like to read more about this!!!
Though I'm no Kikyo fan I find it refreshing to see her as a more complex person and not only the absolute bitch or the absolut nice version. You put elements of both versions in your characterization.
You promised that you will finish this story and I have trust in you!!!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
This is a great story so far. I really am enjoying the world you've built, and the way the characters are interacting. Please come back and update your story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I know there is a reason for the way she is acting but its extremely irritating to the point of slight stupidity.
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