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Kikyo......
blech. I have the feeling this might hinder the budding relationship between the two....D:
Oh....and Sesshoumaru needs to hurry back at some point! Everything's going to hell back in the Western Lands! >.<
LOVE how Kikyo is the one mad at Inuyasha for making Kagome feel inferior, rather than her partcipating in the act like most fics potray her whenever it's a Kagome-centric story. While I like generally like Inuyasha as a character... in this fic, the way you portrayed him makes sense for him to be a minor villain to Kagome and a major one to Kazue. Can't wait for Sesshomaru to be clued in! Also, can't wait for Inuyasha's reaction to Kikyo helping Kagome!
Oh, and Kikyo considering Kazue as a child of her soul... interesting way to look at it, and a surprisingly good reason for Kikyo to help Kagome like she is.
nice first story! got me interested :)
oh! kikyo better not get any idea, she may think it's the pup of her soul, which it is, but it's Kagome's pup, and i cant see her willign to share, not after everything b/c in the end, it is BC of kikyo that the pup was nearly lost in the first place. she may feel intitled or some ofrm of ownership but kagome has every right to put her out of her end the same way inuyasha tried to do their child.
god update!
melissa (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012
yeah a new chapter and thank you. Once again i am going to say one of my favorite things of this chapter and all of the others is the different character points of view. The other thing that i like from this chapter is that kikyo is not a crazy evil person and that she actually has feeling kagomes baby and also that sesshoumaru wasted no time getting back to the three when he thought they were in danger. Thank you again and i cant wait for the next update
Alii (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012
Omg you updated! Again Again! UPDATE SOON!
Yay! You finally updated! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep it coming.
omfg so! yus! more! i'm kinda overly excited right now b/c of this! :333333 this was an excelent chapter and as i said totally willing able and happy to sound board when ever you need it though i hafta say it seems to be going wonderufly no matter waht!
melissa (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012
i saw in your a/n that some might think this story is moving slow but i have to admit that i am enjoying the slow pace of the story and the fact that you are giving several different points of view and not just sticking to kagome and sesshomaru. i think with the different points of view it is becoming a balanced story and i am better able to understand the feeling of all the characters involved. thank you for giving me something that i am very much enjoying to read and eagerly waiting for updates
For once, in all the fanfic's that I have read. Good guy kikyo actually acts like her in-character persona would.
Also, this story is my new crack.
Love the chapter, and can't wait until the next chapter. I know who it is Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's dad. Update soon!
Pricila (Chapter 27) - Sun 14 Oct 2012
Oh my gosh!! Wow. Loved it!
i absolutely love this story. i do wish that it would hurry up in some parts. and i understand what kagoome's been through has been traumatic, but she's kind of vexing me. and she's being kind of a jerk to sesshoumaru-sama. other than that i love this story. please update soon.
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