Reviews for To Be Free by sesshykagslvr

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melissa (Chapter 30) - Fri 28 Dec 2012

i am glad you are back and i really enjoyed this chapter just like all the others i still love how you have all the different points of view of all the characters in this story. I also love how you have written Jaken it forms a perfect picture in my mind of him. Keep up the great work and i cant wait for more


YukiAi (Chapter 29) - Wed 14 Nov 2012

Loving your story! All the characters are in portayal form. Please, keep up the excellent work. I look foreward to reading more.


Alii (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

Maybe Sesshomaru can take a turn babysittin! lol


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


Tessitura (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

Wonderful, can't wait for the next installment.


Koi (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

Wow...That was an intense chapter. I mean WOW! Kikyo loves the baby and claims her as her own. I find that cute because it is kind of true when you really think about it. I also love the fact that Kikyo was a little ticked about the fact that Kagome feels inferior because of Inuyasha.Truth be told Kagome should be a arrogant as Sesshomaru with all the power that she contains. Anywho I do wonder when Sesshomaru is going to find out about the truth of Kagome and Inuyasha's bad relationship and how Kazue was conceived. That is going to be such a GREAT chapter. *smirks* I love how this story is coming along. I do feel bad for Inuyasha, I want him to be in Kazue life so badly because he is the father and that's the right thing to do...but Sesshomaru being the daddy isn't bad either.  


Silverfurred (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

-_-.....

Kikyo......

blech. I have the feeling this might hinder the budding relationship between the two....D: 

 

Oh....and Sesshoumaru needs to hurry back at some point! Everything's going to hell back in the Western Lands! >.<


cmsully (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

LOVE how Kikyo is the one mad at Inuyasha for making Kagome feel inferior, rather than her partcipating in the act like most fics potray her whenever it's a Kagome-centric story.  While I like generally like Inuyasha as a character... in this fic, the way you portrayed him makes sense for him to be a minor villain to Kagome and a major one to Kazue.  Can't wait for Sesshomaru to be clued in!  Also, can't wait for Inuyasha's reaction to Kikyo helping Kagome!

Oh, and Kikyo considering Kazue as a child of her soul... interesting way to look at it, and a surprisingly good reason for Kikyo to help Kagome like she is.


stoictimer (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

nice first story! got me interested :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

oh! kikyo better not get any idea, she may think it's the pup of her soul, which it is, but it's Kagome's pup, and i cant see her willign to share, not after everything b/c in the end, it is BC of kikyo that the pup was nearly lost in the first place. she may feel intitled or some ofrm of ownership but kagome has every right to put her out of her end the same way inuyasha tried to do their child.

god update!


melissa (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Nov 2012

yeah a new chapter and thank you. Once again i am going to say one of my favorite things of this chapter and all of the others is the different character points of view. The other thing that i like from this chapter is that kikyo is not a crazy evil person and that she actually has feeling kagomes baby and also that sesshoumaru wasted no time getting back to the three when he thought they were in danger. Thank you again and i cant wait for the next update


Alii (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

Omg you updated! Again Again! UPDATE SOON!

 


cassandra (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

Yay! You finally updated! I can't wait to see what happens next!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

Keep it coming.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

omfg so! yus! more! i'm kinda overly excited right now b/c of this! :333333 this was an excelent chapter and as i said totally willing able and happy to sound board when ever you need it though i hafta say it seems to be going wonderufly no matter waht!


melissa (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

i saw in your a/n that some might think this story is moving slow but i have to admit that i am enjoying the slow pace of the story and the fact that you are giving several different points of view and not just sticking to kagome and sesshomaru. i think with the different points of view it is becoming a balanced story and i am better able to understand the feeling of all the characters involved. thank you for giving me something that i am very much enjoying to read and eagerly waiting for updates


zenfluence (Chapter 28) - Sun 28 Oct 2012

For once, in all the fanfic's that I have read. Good guy kikyo actually acts like her in-character persona would.

Also, this story is my new crack.


Xian Pendragon (Chapter 27) - Mon 22 Oct 2012

Love the chapter, and can't wait until the next chapter. I know who it is Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's dad.  Update soon!


Pricila (Chapter 27) - Sun 14 Oct 2012

Oh my gosh!! Wow. Loved it!  


Safa Hujurat (Chapter 27) - Sun 14 Oct 2012

i absolutely love this story. i do wish that it would hurry up in some parts. and i understand what kagoome's been through has been traumatic, but she's kind of vexing me. and she's being kind of a jerk to sesshoumaru-sama. other than that i love this story. please update soon.


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