Holy Skillet of Correction!!
LOL!! I seriously needed that when I was reading the reviews that were left to you as well. It seemed some people were missing details when they read the chapters and claimed you didn't mention something, or they didn't use common sense and realize that some details or events wouldn't be needed in your story.
Anyway, I loved the chapter. Her sword is awesome and so is its sheath. I can't wait for the details of the love story to be deciphered and I certainly can't wait to see what else the sword can do. I love how the sheath will hide her aura and her presence. That's some pretty neat protection to keep her hidden from Inuyasha and Naraku and his lackies. I still can't wait to see what happens when Kanna and Kagura catch up to Kouga and the pack. I wonder if Kagura has a thing for Sesshomaru in this story and how she would react to him having feelings for Kagome if she does. It would certainly be interesting. I'm still wondering if we'll hear from Kikyou anytime soon. Oh! and I love that Kagome is accepting of Sesshomaru's feelings and hers for him. Can't wait for the next update.
P.S. I was totally surprised to get this update in my email, but was happy that my estimate of your updating schedule was close. It was only a day before my earliest guess. So lets see....I'm predicting chapter 12 to be here somewhere between the 10th and the 12th of June. Of course I would be insanely happy if it was earlier. =)
keep it coming. the story is getting more and more interesting. what will they do without the sword? i'll be waiting for the next chapters.
i think its kind of hypocritical of Miroku and Sango to put the whole blame on Inuyasha, afterall it was also them that second his choise on kagome going back to her time and move on.... Not that im defending Inuyasha at all, not at all.... But they just dont seem to remember that they told her to go back tonher time... Now they're looking dejected because of the sword not working properly.... They have as much fault as well.......
tonya (Chapter 10) - Wed 15 May 2013
an awesome chapter!
Good, they're getting what they deserve. Please uopdate soon!
xinyi (Chapter 10) - Wed 15 May 2013
awww things with s n k r going well. :) feel so sorry for inuyasha though.
rose (Chapter 10) - Wed 15 May 2013
next chapter please
Keep it coming, Happy Belated Mother's Day!
TKE (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 May 2013
Inu really screwed up this time!!
I liked that we finally got to see what was going on from Inuyasha's POV as well as the rest of the group. Miroku and Sango certainly aren't trying to hide from the truth. Inuyasha only wants Kagome back to get his sword to work and to find jewel shards for him. I think the only one of the group that's really thinking for what's best on both sides is Miroku. Even Sango wants Kagome back for selfish reasons and not even give her the full month. I can understand that she's probably worried about her safety but she seems to be putting Kagome's feelings aside.
i also noticed the little detail about the dragon being asleep still. I guess he really was lucky that Naraku didn't show up and wake him up. He would have been screwed with him not being able to lift the sword, use the strikes or have Kagome there to cheer and encourage him.
I also like the look into what's going on with Naraku. That was nice to know. On a side note....I'm wondering if Kikyou knows that Kagome is 'gone' and that Inuyasha is having problems.
Can't wait for more. I even think I've to your update schedule down for this story so I know ruffly when to expect an update. XD. I'll look for chapter 11 around the 28th or the 29th. =)
Alii (Chapter 9) - Sat 04 May 2013
I need that update!! (: loving the story!
lyka (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 May 2013
this fanfict is really good but it says erotica in the genras dose it not? its been seven chapters and not even a kiss has been exchanged its still good but i think you should take the erotica genra off
mari (Chapter 9) - Thu 02 May 2013
loving it thanks.
tonya (Chapter 9) - Thu 02 May 2013
a most excellent chapter! keep up the good work.
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