Where to even start... I got so much to say and point out but I'm not motivated enough to do so. All I can say is "Thanks" for the author's effort however, If I were to rate this story out of 10 I'll give it a 5. The potential was clearly there it just got so many plot holes "literally", its confusing and a little bit boring for my standard at least.
Anyways, it was a very slow pacing story, there's little action, nor fluffy/hot scenes, and it jumps from one scenario to another without finishing the former properly. It's almost kind of like a journal actually. Still good though.
Would I recommend it? = Nah.
Is it worth the shot? = I guess so, if you have nothing more to read and do then suit yourself.
Though props to how the flow of each conversation goes. = well written on those parts.
All in all still cute but not really close to being one of the possible best fanfic out there.
^-^ <3<3<3
Acb6293 (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 Jan 2022
God I wish Inuyasha went more like this. Kagome and Inuyasha s relationship is so messed up! He's mentally abusive, making her feel like she's not good enough ever! And he never chose her over Kikyo it was ALWAYS KIKYO and they only ended up together by default because he couldn't have Kikyo. I just feel bad for our heroine she deserved much better then he gave her
Y'all all deserve it!
I like how they didn't equate themselves and their words into her staying away...foolish and hypocritical
megan (Chapter 30) - Sun 26 May 2019
I love this story. =D
It's such a slow burn
I noticed that the Inuyasha group doesn't even seem to miss Kagome as a person or a friend. How did they expect to find the shards or keep them pure without Kagome when they first made the decision and told Kagome to give them the shards? Wouldn't it be better if she kept the shards so Naraku could never get them to complete the jewel?
How come the idea of training Kagome so she can defend herself better never comes up? Wouldn't that be important since it is almost impossible to always protect someone?
Kim (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Feb 2016
Kim (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Feb 2016
This is an absolutely wonderful story, beautifully written and addicting! I couldn't put it down. The way you used the sheath is so sweet, great idea! I will definantly be looking to see what else you've written.
that was great I really enjoyed it. Sorry to hear you won't be writing more inuyasha fan fics anymore at least for a while. Maybe eventually Have you ever written any Buffy the Vampire slayer stories? I really like those too just a thought for a change if you are interested
This was a great story :-)
I live how wise Togaou and Kaede are in your story. A lot of stories brush them off as simple side characters, and while they aren't the main ones in your story, they contribute to the plot and growth of Sess and Kagome quite a bit. Its a great story so far...
caleb (Chapter 30) - Sun 13 Jul 2014
that was absoulutely incredible. I commend you for an extremely well written piece
Denise (Chapter 30) - Sat 12 Jul 2014
This story was awesome. Thank you for finishing the story. I liked how you warapped everything up very nicely. I hope to some day read other stories. Keep your head up and wish you tons of happiness in your life. :)
Denise (Chapter 29) - Sat 12 Jul 2014
Yeayyyy he is dead. What a great ended to the fight. :)
Denise (Chapter 28) - Sat 12 Jul 2014
Wow, almost done. They seem like they will be able to work as a team now. :)
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