"A Misplace" is actually what human beings came up with during the slave trade. I have no idea how many years ago. It is still done in some states. Even one's that aren’t slave trade. Some families, where the men were raised to treat the women like cattle or just a breeding bitch or otherwise, actually still treat their women like trash. One odd things is that the mostly known areas where there are wife/husband beaters are in states that start with C, M, and sometimes W. There are still quite a few states in Canada and illegal parts in the north western hemisphere. Sooner or later it will be seen as normal then written as okay for others to read. It starts with a man that smokes outside. Then he goes inside where it can actually cause family members harm, but because they don’t want to refuse him they let him. Then, the man smoking in the house is handing his cigarette to a 5 year old sitting next to him so the child could smoke to.
In a pack of dogs, wolves, or other animals it is completely different. -rolls eyes- I've seen horses with better decency. Though the violent breeding videos on youtube or the net would also say otherwise about their handlers and how they treat their animals. Sadly not that many know how to bring out/teach/show them how to be a kind female or a gentle male. Just this evening someone had their bulldog out and all I was doing was walking my small dachshund to my mothers for dinner. As soon as the bulldog noticed us he ran from that very family that had let him out, crossed a double road, and went straight for “Lilly” my dog, quite aggressively if I might add; I just picked her up, looked at him calmly, shook my head, and continued walking. If they had trained him and let him learn how to be around other dogs he would not have ran off in the first place or been so aggressive in his growling, and barking, with hackles raised. If I were an inexperienced person (which I’m not. I’ve handled animals all my life) and if I were to have showed fear he could have easily turned on us either my dog would be dead, I would have injured my arm or worse to fight him off, or lets just say I could have come out with just a bite, or I would be pretty damn lucky and be fine if you have good instincts. What ever the outcome (we’re fine) a “misplace” is quite a cruel and degrading act. Taught through generations or just made up on the spot to be cruel or show dominance. Quite a few men and woman have dominance issues.
It’s depressing to know that several authors would still use this in the negative way. Some married couples though, like to try a misplace to spice up their relationship. Like Exobitionists “likes to show off in front of a group when screwing or just showing off their genitals to an unsuspecting person.” though that and the next few others I add are known as disorder. (such a strange way to put it. It’s more like preferences to their character and ect. -shrugs-) It can also be generally people who like random kinks in their love life. -Some others; are Masochist “someone who gains pleasure from pain, humiliations, beatings, bound or otherwise”, a Sadist “someone who gains pleasure from giving others pain” (not sure if that counts) lol the next is Voyeurism: the recurring urge or behavior to observe someone who is disrobing and/or engaging in sexual activities, or not at all sexual in nature.
Anyway, besides my dislike for the word/metaphor or usage. I am still curious as to what your story you have started is all about. So far you write with quite a few gaps in the chapter (like an Oneshot) -shrugs- no bigy. Just confusing sometimes till you put the gaps together and try to figure out their journey that got them there. Basically I noticed there is always some form of a long amount of time frames between chapters. Um… not really sure how else to put it. Characterizations okay, scenery -you could add more if you like, descriptions of people -not as much but also okay.
Well, thank you for writing.
rose (Chapter 15) - Mon 15 Apr 2013
next chapter please
Keep it coming.
I think your story is developing very well. So happy to be reading an update.
Keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 14) - Sun 14 Apr 2013
next chapter please
Didnt expect that one. Almost thought it would have kikyo seeing kagome. But still an awesome chapter.
Keep it coming.
eniarol (Chapter 13) - Thu 11 Apr 2013
I think sesshomaru should suffer more...^^ I wonder when will kagome learn how to break the bond??? love your story! cant wait for the net chap...
rose (Chapter 13) - Thu 11 Apr 2013
next chapter please
This story has potential, but it is very rushed. Kagome hasn't got the right reactions for somebody who has been raped and kidnapped. She is so willing to accept a fur from her rapist? It does not make sense to me. Also I see some similarities with texanlady's fanfiction, the breeder. That is a wonderful fic which time was taken to flesh out the story, if you want your fic to be good, i suggest you take your time with the plot and not be in a hurry for them to fall in love.
Keep it coming.
wow! awesome chapter. cant wait for the next
rose (Chapter 12) - Tue 09 Apr 2013
next chapter please
Keep it coming.
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