Reviews for Bent by Moonlight Silk

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Ana (Chapter 94) - Fri 09 May 2014

Sesshomaru is being an ass... Am sorry, but it’s the truth! The prince didn't do anything wrong... And yet... 

All the decisions he's been making go from bad to worse... --" 

Thank you for the update! <3 

Ps:

(spoiler - don't read if you don't want to know) 

I get the feeling that Kags is pregnant? I don’t know (obviously xD) but I have a felling… Oh well… xD


elizabeth (Chapter 94) - Fri 09 May 2014

l do not want that sesshomaru being nice witch the princess .presage the princess will pass to the dark side and become in a witch { the princess and sesshomaru never father  children together 


Caera (Chapter 94) - Fri 09 May 2014

Great chapter!


momo (Chapter 94) - Fri 09 May 2014

I'm so addicted to this story... I love it... Can't get enough of it. 


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 93) - Wed 07 May 2014

hi...good chapter...I had to read it a few times to really follow it...it was well done...it will be interesting to see what happens next...Kagome will do well in the end...

 

good job...

:]

 


Miss C (Chapter 93) - Wed 07 May 2014

I wanted to know why you dedcided to the story down this path. I may not like it, but it is a well written story. I have a feeling Kagome might be pregnant.


Shaneka (Chapter 93) - Wed 07 May 2014

When I read the authors note I expected to be so grossed out but it was not that bad. Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

So much pain for Kagome, hope she still finds her own happiness, keep it coming. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

So much pain for Kagome, hope she still find her own happiness, keep it coming. 


Tana_san (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

I am such a mess. You've had me in tears with this separation. I am literally crying! Oh how I wish Kagome could try to accept being Sesshoumaru's first mate and this woman for the sake of youkai humanity. But I fully understand because I wouldn't be able to be a second participant in my husband's knowing he sleeps with another. There are too many years that have gone by. I honestly don't believe I would have lived through his mating of the other woman.

I really feel so awful for the children too, especially for their youngest. Aiko is Kagome's child with Sessh, right? Oh, I also had another thing I wanted to ask if you don't mind as I find many writer's don't think about this when they're writing. You are aware that if the princess was fertile that she could still become pregnant even though Sessh pulled out before ejaqulation, right? Honestly, that would solve the need for an heir, but  yeah, I just wanted to be sure you knew this fact that semen is found in the liquid that leaks from the penis to help lubricate it's passage into the vagina. Even though the rules here say no young readers, they still read anyway and they need to know this fact as it's not always taught. Several writer's forgot this and made an author's note pointing to this fact that pulling out does not prevent pregnancy. 

 I just can't wait to find out how this ends up. Right now this is my top of the list story. You have done such a marvelous job at keeping the interest level high and the curiuosity factor a maximum too. Your battle scenes and love scenes are at the peak of greatness and the emotional scenes are perfection.   JEN


Ana (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

I don't know were you are planing to go with this story.... But it's getting painful! :3 Even for me! 

Thanks for sharing! <3


Monica (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

I feel so emotionally drained by this chapter. You are truly brilliant!


silentsoliloquy82 (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

I enjoy your fic for the most part, but this chapter wasn't easy to read.  I couldn't stop the distaste I was feeling and my stomach was churning like that of the princess.  I know it needed to happen and I *really* hope there aren't any children.  I am anguished for the princess, Sesshomaru, their children, and Kagome.  Keep up the great work!


elizabeth (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

the princess hope you never have children of sesshomaru ...possess an amazing talent of writing 


Kagome Ketchup (Chapter 93) - Tue 06 May 2014

The emotional upset I felt from reading the latest installment indicates the effectiveness of the writing. I just wish that the resolution is not rushed because it will take time for the characters to plausibly and believably overcome this setback in their relationship. If it is not too much to ask, no deus ex machina please. Endings using such device in fiction tend to be very unsatisfying. 


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 92) - Tue 06 May 2014

Hi...good CHapter...it is well done...i can't wait for THe next one...tHis cHapter is tHe begining...we will see wHat Happens to kagome...kagome, i like tHat sHe is not mad at Him...tHat is kagome all te way...sHe is back to teacHing cHildren in Edo...tHat is one tHing sHe loved doing...

 

good job...


mistikey (Chapter 92) - Mon 05 May 2014

I cant read it anymore you're breaking kagome and its not right cuz after what hes done whyvwould she ever go back to him and what's the point if theyre not together just makes me sad


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 92) - Sun 04 May 2014

Kagome is right, It is over. Hope she finds happiness, keep it coming. 


Ealla (Chapter 92) - Sun 04 May 2014

Honestly I really wish this chapter wasn't all about sesshomaru and the princess. Especially the whole she smells good and is beautiful part. I don't really want to read about a romance between him and some other random character I want to read about a romance between him and kagome. I know you are setting the stage but I think I got the point already. This isn't a flame just my opinion. 


elizabeth (Chapter 92) - Sun 04 May 2014

if you come  back to life again  inutaisho and returns from the dead .to make if mate of kagome good job


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