Reviews for Bent by Moonlight Silk

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elizabeth (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

l'm sorry l'm wrong ron again . my english is not very good .sesshomaru take another companion of again .kagome not deserve to go throungh this again 


elizabeth (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

not again sesshomaru of new  has wuith another bitch to marry .not i do not want sesshomaru to separate fron kagome


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

and so it begins...i had a feeling that is what was going to happen if Kagome was not with him...it will be interesting to see what happens next...i believe that his dream he had the other day comes true...

good job and update soon...i can't wait to see what happens next...

 

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Shaneka (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

What the hell man I so did not see that one coming, anyway update soon.


Emerald LockHeart (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

FUCK THAT DON'T MARRY THAT BITCH SESSHOMARU THINK ABOUT KAGOME SHE SO SHOULD HAVE BEEN WITH HIM TO MEET THIS ASSHOLE!


satuross (Chapter 83) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

Screw human race. Wipe them out


Annonymous (Chapter 82) - Thu 20 Mar 2014

I am waiting for the axe to fall. Your story is really exciting and the build up for the backstory is great. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 82) - Mon 17 Mar 2014

Poor Kagome, keep it coming. 


Aviva (Chapter 81) - Wed 12 Mar 2014

Wow! excellent chapter, so filled with emotions. I read your other story and while it was good I can say that you have made vast improvements in your writing and grammar. Take for example this chapter, you were able to show the the complex emotions of each individuals as they fought with their consciences of taking the children's lives. I would never want to have to make a decision like that for obvious reasons. Tora was the voice of reason as he could tell that Sessh did not really want to kill the kids, however, he knew that his friend would not stop him once he moved to destroy them. Survival can be a two edged swore. As you wrote and stated accurately, if they had left the dragonlings alive after witnessing their clan's demise by the them, it could spell disaster for them in the future. Inuyasha left because he could not land a killing blow against them and he did not want to stay and be a witness to such cruelty, however, he also said that they would grow up to become the hideous and heartless beings that they'd hunted and killed earlier.

I have a feeling that Sesshomaru may have left them alive if Tora did not kill two of them off so easily. He was there long enough before the others joined him and he did not move to strike them down. He felt sorry for them because they were children and he is a father, and Kagome's influence on him have changed him some more for the better. He rationalized that they might be able to lead a different life if they were brought up with good morals. You did not state specifically that he killed the last child, you only stated that his other hand glowed green...and when the deed was done he carried the boy's body to the cave. I wonder what that really means? You are a very clever writer and I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter. I liked the parts in this chapter where Kagome was in it as well.


Aviva (Chapter 80) - Wed 12 Mar 2014

I am relieved that they got there in time, but now they have dragons to hunt. I like the interaction between Shippo and Sesshomaru, they seem like kindred spirit now. Great job.


Aviva (Chapter 79) - Wed 12 Mar 2014

I had to leave a little review after reading so many chapters trying to catch up. I like how the story is progressing because you can see how all the events are coming together for the prophesy to unfold. Don't know what it will be, but I can hardly wait. Great writing.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 81) - Tue 11 Mar 2014

Sad for them to kill all those kids, keep it coming.


satuross (Chapter 81) - Mon 10 Mar 2014

Wow...just wow... They killed them off he He he


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 80) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

Great, keep it coming. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 79) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

Like the chapter, keep it coming.


Haven (Chapter 79) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

Goodness, there is just no real reprieve from trials and tribulation for this family:(  I'm just wondering why had they not reached out to the human emperor before in the short time of peace especially given Kagome's knowledge of the future...or had they?  Not sure if that was mentioned. Thanks for updating. 


Shaneka (Chapter 79) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what lies ahead.


Emerald LockHeart (Chapter 79) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

I hope they will be able to have a baby soon because if not i'm getting a bad feeling about this.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 78) - Fri 14 Feb 2014

All great chapters, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 


Shaneka (Chapter 78) - Thu 13 Feb 2014

Excellent chapters, every time I read I fall more in love with this story. Update soon.


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