really great update thanks for updating.
This story has several Dark elements to it. The "glee" in doing this is odd, as well as continuing to ask someone to take care of your child who doesn't want to or is irresponsible and then being surprised when it's screwed up. He's an adult who can be a jerk if he wants. All of the characters are a bit odd at minimum and/or OOC. It's certainly a different perspective and inventive though.
Can't wait to see what happens.
love your chappy! i hope this is a long chase to really make Sesshomaru feel really bad and dirty that he rather work and date than try to take care of his sister. usually he is an honorable youkai! i love where this is going! please i cant wait for you to install the next chappy! please let it be soon!!!.
OooH! So far so good!
I can't wait to read more! :)
mari (Chapter 2) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
that was a great update thanks for the quick update.
Nicka (Chapter 2) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
I love it, I don't think I have ever read a story like this one before. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Great start and I can't wait for the next chapter.
mari (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
its good thanks .
oh goody goody goody!!! you are a wicked writer!!! i love this chapter and cant wait to watch him squirm and be sent on this chase!!! please please install the next chappy soon!!!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
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