loved the update it was adorable.
Maybe it's just me, but i think you went, a bit too fast with this :/
As romantic as it may be, I would have liked it more, if it has some more subtence... Please, don't take it as a flame (i personally hate flmes)!
Still, i liked it overall. Nice work ;)
Thanks for the update <3
Great chapter, I'm glad Rin is ok! Keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Apr 2014
i really love it thanks.
Ana (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Apr 2014
I don't mind if the battle and rescue were short! *-* Sess was a hero! :D
Thanks for the update! <3
Nicole (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Apr 2014
Battle: not too long + not too short = just right. Especially since this isn't (so far) an ultimate-Naraku-showdown type story :)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
rose (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Apr 2014
next chapter please
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