okay, going to try and catch up on reviews so they wont be as long as normal - though I imagine that will be a bit of a relief! lol

Chapter 28: Well for starters let me say that you really had me biting my fingernails. How creepy to have someone wading in the shadows of your room. As usual you write to make the readers FEEL the anticipation, and my nailbeds do NOT thank you for it ;)

Loved jealous Naraku, becasue of course he's so sexy. And you know I love a good citrus scen, which you also write beautifully. You keep it tactful without loosing the kinkyness which makes it so much fun. And again the dialogue in the citrus scene really added to the steamy factor! I think you're my fave lemon writer, EVER for this very reason (the dialogue.)

Also the reminder of how POWERFUL and DANGEROUS Naraku is was important here, I felt. I've been kinda falling for him so I've felt Kagome's same struggle with her duty to get rid of him, but this reminder of whats at stake if she fails.

Brava! :)

such a good story and you keep leaving me hanging but yay they kissed:)

I don't mind cliffies anymore, i expect them half the time.I would hate to feel that agony for so long, holding onto pain isn't good for anybody but that type is impossible to get totally rid of. The only thing i can ask is that the Thief not take advantage of Kagome comforting the Professor, if anyone's going to get booty in this situation it should be Sesshomaru. Loved this chapter, as heartwrenching as it was to read it it was awesome.

Hey... they kissed. Not so much of a cliffy in my book. Though I suppose what happens after remains in flux, as far as being left hanging this one's not so bad.

Love the background, even though it made me cry.

Thanks for writing.

Yes so very cruel! lol  Great job...loved all the emotions in this chapter

Love this chapter! So touching!

He is opening up some. I feel like it is going to be a sad story but I am eager to hear it. Hopefully this brings them closer and nothing happens to ruin the mood. I feel like opening up will be a good thing for both of them and might even more them forward a little in their...whatever. I can't wait to see what happens in their funky love triangle :)

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *cries her eyes out* Beautifully written. I love love love love love this chapter so much. Rin's story is sad but it brought Kagome and Sessho together more. I dont have the words but you certainly do have a talent. Maybe you should punish one day. I would certainly buy your books. Anyways I would love a happy ending for Kag and Sessho but make sure that Na Ra Ku has one as well. I loves him too haha. Cany wait for the next update.

SAD! But this is interesting, puts the age difference between Sess/Kag into better perspective. Tell me more! *laughs*

Till the next update, good luck and blessings.

I think that was the perfect place to stop, if you had gone on any more it would have been super long or odd feeling when you did eventually cut it off. I hope that your pregnancy doesn't cause any more problems for you, it must suck. I can wait to see what happens next, i have a feeling it will be extremely depressing in the end. Congrats on winning, i hope you have many more wins under your belt in the future =)

Oh My...Kagura out there. Sad chapter....but a well written chapter.

this story just has me hooked i love it so much keep writing please:)

Oh my... :O

Sesshoumaru used to be with Kagura...?!

I can't imagine how Kagome must be feeling...

And oh Sesshoumaru...

The poor guy.

Hey! Thanks for updating. It keeps the suspense in the story going and keeps the readers waiting for more. I hope your pregnancy is going all right. Make sure you get a lot of rest or that dreaded writers block will get you! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

First, congratulations on your pregnancy. And condolences on not feeling well, I know that feeling oh so too well myself ^^ Time does soften the memories, but yes, I remember how it was, not being able to do much, being tired all the time and the sickness...

Second, thank you for amazing chapter as usual. I can't wait to read the story behind Rin. I loved every single bit of this chapter. You make them so easy to relate to, though I wish you'd get rid of the Tief soon. Or lock him up and let the main couple have their sweet time... 

Aaaaaanyway, I loved this and can't wait for more ^^

This is such a great story!  I just started reading it and I'm hooked!  Thanks so much for sharing it!

beautiful story... I love it

Oh my. Oh my oh my oh my. This is gonna get iiiiiinteresting, isn't it? I can't wait! XD