Fantastic chapter! I loved the twist - completely unexpected and expected at the same time!

Love the mix of humour and creepiness in this chapter! (Especially the bit about Kagome trying to rationalize away Taisho's attentions)

This is brilliant! I love the atmosphere you've created - and I almost feel like I'm in the cavern with Kagome, feeling as if something was hiding in the shadows. The descriptions are so vivid without being tedious - heck, I'd read this if it weren't about Sesshoumaru and Kagome!

And now it's on to chp 2!

Woot Chapter 20! and what a wonderful 20 chapter it is (: I'll be waiting for the next one <3<3<3

Oh, wow, what an AMAZING chapter. I love, absolutely love the chemistry between the Thief, and Kagome. I'm always reading this story to look for the moments they have together. Aw, now I'm hoping he doesn't actually go away in the end.. It'd be so sad!

Thank you so much by the way for sharing your own experience with your grandfather with us. I'm very sorry to hear that, but I hope you know you're an amazing woman that he'd be -- that he is proud of. :)

So... he's got a bit of a soft spot for her hmm? I guess that's the Prof's infulence... Lovely chapter and happy as a pixie that you updated so quickly. Looking forward to more greatness.

Hugs
Alpine ^_^

This got me too. my grandfather died abruptly in house fire. I was very close to him, but I can't say he was good man unfortunately. But he was still my grandfather and I loved him. I missed a quite a few chapters, but I'm glad to caught up again and it was really good and well worth the wait, can't wait for more.

Sorry about your grandfather...

I love your writing. I bet he'd proud of you :) Everyone should be proud of you!!!

Keep doing this thing you do... it's amazing.

xoxo

I adore you frey.

Poor Kagome has so many burdens on her heart and mind.  Between the secrets she's keeping and then her Grandfather...I can only imagine the pain she's going through.  Will she break?  Will her Knight In Shining Armor come to her aid?

Lovely chapter even if I was quite emotional at the end of it.

I like how this story differs from others and yet it doesn't seem far fetched.

Absolutely adore it and can't wait for next update!

P.s. I'm sorry about your grandad.

Great Chapter!

What a best way to begin the weekend with my favorite story! I am dying 2 find out what did Myoga helped Sesshomaru with! And I'm sorry about your grandpa! I remember when my older brother passed away, just a few months before I began having this weird feeling that something was going to happen, so I started calling him every week (we lived in different countries) just to check on him, and as time went by I felt more and more aprehensive, and the feeling just got worse, but he kept telling me that he was fine, but the feeling would not go away, so I called their kids and told them to watch him and take care of him, and gave them every possible number to get a hold of me, and every e-mail address they could send me a note in case of an emergency. And just like that, a few days after I talked to him, I got a call from one of his kids to tell me that they had found him on the floor of his business unconscious, he had an aneurysm and never regained conscience again. I couldn't go to his funeral because I was waiting for my visa to get aproved, which didn't happen on time. But I felt so bad!! I knew there had to be a reason why I was so worried about him! But I didn't want to tell anyone because my family is very supersticious and the bearer of bad news, or someone who fortells bad omens is not seen in a good light, so I kept it for myself, but what hurt me the worst is that I never got to say goodbye to him or see him one more time. I am glad that Kagome will have that chance, it hurts a lot more when you don't get that chance.

This chapter was very funny in that Myoga seemed to just get Kagome in the forehead for almost any reason, and poor Kagome couldn't do anything to stop him!! LOL! Never underestimate the power of the wise ones! Please update again soon! I love this story!

So I got teary eyed when they started talking about her grandfather. Only to burst into tears when she starts to sob. OMG that was a highly emotional ending.....and you just left it at that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome. fabulous, amazing story :-)

I don't believe I have ever been this intrigued this quickly by a story. I was completely hooked by a 1/23 of the way into the first chapter. I'm not quite sure what it was that I was finding so fascinating, but I hope I'll find more of it soon! Now I'm off to read the rest of the story! XD

I got real choked up in this chapter too. My grandfather is sorta where Kagome's is at this point. He has pick's disease and its an agressively degenerative condition so although he may sometimes seem fine, we're all sort of in wating - if you know what I mean. I thought you played the emotion well without over doing it. Its trickey balance to try and find.

I'm so glad you are exploring Kagome's "sight" more. You've not lost sight of the plot in exploring this more, and in fact its thickening the plot a bit! I loved the Myoga/Lagome interactions. The slight illusion to Kagome's eventual potential and strength with her gift was subtle but important. And the casual show of affection that Myoga already displays for Kagome when she's hurting, is deffinately telling about his respect for her - which considering his insight into the human psyche really speaks a lot about Kagome.

I also loved that Myoga's character has its own Freya twist without loosing some of the traits that makes him the Myoga in the series! Its so clever how you blend the two!

Kinda missing that sinfully sexy Naraku. I'm dying to see how they will meet again, and how things will be different now they are back AND after their last tense meeting where Kagome kinda felt bad. Will she continue to struggle with that side of her that can't help but pity him? I think she WANTS to forgive and find redemption in him and I suspect that this demon will be a vital part of her maturing.

Plus I can't wait to see Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship evolve. I'm curious HOW he'll open up to Kagome.

Well sorry to cut this short but my new son calls for food. xoxo! I'll pm you soon dear!

amazing chappie <3

I just looooooooooooooooove this story hehehe it reminds me a tiny bit of some books I read because of the way Kagome contacts her spirituality, but I like it.

I don't like the fact that Nah Rah Ku gets the crescent moon on his forehead >_< but bleh, I bet you got a reason for that (if so, I'm Krazy4fluffy :p you could PM me and tell me about it hehehe :D)

I'm gonna keep readin now =p *-* <3

xoxo

This is so O.O

i n t e r e s t i n g

please keep wrighting i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!