I love this story so much! It's so real, even with the bizzar, that it pulls me in.
That last sentence gave me the shivers when Nah Ra Ku comes back after Sesshomary falls asleep! Yees! Maybe some hot angry sex. >__>"
Gosh, I can't help but love Nah Ra Ku!
Anyways! I'm so happy you updated, and hey, it's understandable for the wait. You have a life of your own, and with 3 kids I'm surprised you still get enough time to update. :) Take care, and looking forward to reading more <3
tazsmith (Chapter 28) - Sat 16 Apr 2011
I saw that u updated and I was soooo excited!! I really loved the chapter too!! But I got to the end and I just went 'nooo'.. this is me hoping that you find the inspiration and time to update soon! I love all ur stories but this one of my favorites :). Have a good month Freya!! :)
Uh-oh... Methinks that Nah Rah Ku is jealous... I wonder what shall happen... That was a great chapter, and as usual, it drew me in like all of the rest of the story. Thank you for updating!! :)
Vrey (Chapter 28) - Sat 16 Apr 2011
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... i want MORE!!!
hm, i never notice obvious mistakes when it's not beta'ed. But oh this chapter was awesome! I loved it, especially the end, Sesshomaru possessive and angry is so hot and then Naraku getting control at the end was a pleasant to see how it finally happens, looking at it from his perspective is nice. I hope you do it more often and that you update soon, i'm willing to wait as long as it takes as long as you finish this awesome story.
Paige (Chapter 28) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
Great chapter! Poor Sesshomaru is so jealous.
I can't wait to see what The Theif is going to do! :D
Gah, still in love as always with your story even though I'm not pleased at where it ended LOL I saw that you play Dragon Age II and I was wondering on what system? I have a PS3 and I'm always looking to add friends! Let me know. I understand life, stories can't be rushed simply to get them out of the way...or else the story comes out rushed. I love this story and can't wait to see where your mind takes it!
lauren (Chapter 28) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
FENRIS!!
Believe me, I am a Fenris fangirl too, I know exactly what you are talking about. I lost a week to that game. Fic always takes second place to real life though - we can wait!
uhohs~.... o.0
Elle (Chapter 28) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
I'm so glad you updated! :D
I wonder what Nah Rah Ku will do now... I hope he doesn't cause too much trouble for Sesshoumaru... :S
kathyn (Chapter 28) - Fri 15 Apr 2011
great story
That was a great chapter. I wondered how you would do the Lyka scene and I loved it. Is she really gone now? Will she make another appearance? Thank you for updating your awesome story. It is greatly appreciated.
Kamiki (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
I love what you've done with this story! :)
I'm also wondering if Kagome is going to be able to go through with the exercising of Nah Rah Ku without feeling a tinge of guilt.
vanna (Chapter 27) - Wed 30 Mar 2011
just started reading this the other day and absolutely love it! can't wait for the next update. going to go check out the fanart now, yay!
I just found this story and I swear, I read up to here in, like, one stretch. This is so good! I can't help but think that if you changed some of the names to perserve the innocent (namely you!) this is a story that could seriously be made into a book and published. But don't you dare before you finish it for us here! I LOVE this!
Anna (Chapter 27) - Fri 25 Mar 2011
It's okay if you want to take things slowly, the chapters are lovely and incredibly well written, but as a valued, amazing member of the community we cherish you more than a chapter <3
I love this story. It took me for ever to put a connection to Nah Rah Ku and Naraku, but i finnally did it. It is a great story so far.
Please update soon. I love this story. I cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks.
Loveyaa (Chapter 27) - Thu 24 Mar 2011
At least they got to help. I wonder if they will be able to actually get rid of Lyka though. I feel like not telling Naruku bout it should be the least of her concerns and pretty easy to do actually. Just don't tell him. She should really be worried bout not exposing her and the professor because that dilemia takes place everyday (vs. when Naraku pops up every once in a while). I am really excited to see how Naraku's feelings towards Kagome develop. I just can't wait to see what happens next :)
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