I am so speechless to how good this is getting! I can't wait until your next update! A jealous Sesshomaru is sooooo hot! lol I love where this is going! I can't wait until your next update!
hmmm well there was one word that wasnt making since toward the end "heading" should be "heeding"
and well the flow on how u start is some what slow but picks up around the end not the middle, you kinda lost me in the middle. and the demoness shouldve been more powerful like level with kagome but still easily vanquished.
thats my two cents
that was great. I liked the fact that Sesshoumaru was a little jealous of Kagome ogling his men. And her relationship with Haru is endearing. I like the fact that there is someone there for her. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I love these updates between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. I hope he can win her over and be won over by her too. looking forward to the next chapter.
Nilee1 (Chapter 28) - Tue 13 Aug 2013
She is dangerous; you are awesome.
A great chapter, really. I find myself curiously feeling bad for Kagome's reiki haha. The way you wrote it made it seem alive and desperately fighting not just for Kagome's survival, but its own against the youki that looks like it will be replaced by. Looking forward to more updates!
mari (Chapter 28) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
loved the updates thanks.
Poor Kagome,I want to see her and Sesshomaru get mated soon. Please update the next chapters quick, keep it coming.
This chapter was hot.
Wow! that was hot. That aside I am happy that Kagome has started to act on her feelings for Sesshomaru. Love the update.
Kachina (Chapter 26) - Fri 02 Aug 2013
I love this story! And I am starting to support the budding realtionship between Sango and Yasuhiro. I know Miroku may need some love but, I love who Sango is going for now.
I'm glad this chapter is about Sesshomaru and Kagome and I can't wait for them to be mated, I hope Sesshomaru falls in love with Kagome and she with him. Please update the next chapter quick, keep it coming.
A good chapter, I find Sesshomaru's personality more fascinating the way you're depicting it than normal. Please update again soon!
mari (Chapter 26) - Wed 31 Jul 2013
thanks for the update loved it .
Boohoo!!! I want Sango paired with Yasuhiro. I get tired of her being paired with a pervert who disrepects her. I like Miroku but not for her.
Adorei a Fanfic !!! Muito Boa !! continua logo viu !!!! Pff !!! se não você será responsavel por minha morte !!!
I like what's developing between Sango and the Kelpie. Also how Kegome and Sesshomaru are developing. Keep 'em coming.
I love the thought of Sango and Yasuhiro. He seems so much more in like/love with Sango than Miroku. She seems to have these feelings toward him that she just doesn't with Miroku. I'm not against S/M together, I just love seeing Sango actually feeling those womanly reactions and seeing her blush at this youkai's affections. The last scene was very well written. I do hope his children are all ok. JEN
You are on fire with all these fast updates, angel!! I LOVE THEM! Keep up the great work and welcome back! You've been missed dearly!
I like this remorseful Kikyou who acts more like a woman and less than a vengeful miko. I pity hers and Inuyasha's ill fate.
I'm awed as always by your fighting scenes. I love how you incorporate myths from Japanese and other cultures into your story. It's so interesting to see the different foes you decide to use in each chapter. It's like I'm watching the Inuyasha anime again! Lol
I do like your character development. Sango is finally beginning to sort out her feelings; though, she clearly leans towards Miroku's side. I feel sorry for Yasuhiro because he's a great male, but it was never meant to be...I'm anxious to read how all this will play out!
Looking forward to more! XD
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