argh so many cliffies...

For some reason the hole sessh crawling to kag thing reminded me of pepe le pew and how he traps who ever it is he is chasing. Fair is fair kagome, why not give sessh a chance, also, way to kill the moon youki. 

Another great chapter thank you for the update. 

Yes!!! *claps hands* Kagome needs love too. She needs to let Inuyasha be and be with Sesshomaru. I love Inuyasha, but I love a Kagome and Sesshomaru pairing even more. Kagome needs to tell Inuyasha boy bye!!

Please update next chapter real quick, keep it coming.

Well done!

Just so you know I am yelling at my tablet right now, but I loved the chapter and I can not wait for the next.  ^_^

have they reached the top of the cliff yet?!? If I read another cliffy I might die!

Sesshomaru and Kagome are going to get it on, keep it coming.

GAH!  What the hell. It's like a cliffhanger extension! As if hey, let's give you a cliffie,  and have a new episode, but instead of resolving said cliffie, lets make it worse!  

(pout)

More please.

This story is absolutely amazing! I can't wait for more to be revealed.:3 I am very excited about what is to come to Kagome.

Can't wait to find out how this goes down!

Keep it coming.

Alright! I can read and review from my phone again. Update soon please. :)

Please update this is a good story

I really liked your The kelpie is of scottish origin but there are more than one or two ideas for them. In most legends they are evil spirits that live by tricking beautiful young women and innocent children under water to drown them before devouring their souls. In another they are collectors of the dead carrying them to the spirit world. This makes a very interesting twist.

Did you know that you tense jump? From past tense (had, was, said, pointed) to present tense (has, is, says, points)? I'm so used to it being one way or another, with the exception of dialog, that it kind of throws me for a loop. I tend to pause and reread all the places where it's written in present tense in past tense as that is what most of the chapter is in. The pausing kinda... um... torments me because I get taken out of the groove of the story. There are a tiny sprinkle of oddities where your words don't always match up, for example drown (to lack the ability to take in air underwater and start to die) instead of drawn (to be pulled toward).  I wasn't sure you knew, so I just wanted to bring it to your attention. ~~~~Beyond that, I can say I truly do enjoy the story so far. Well written, baring the oddities, well planned, well executed. I quite like the lead in. It's simple, clean, but far from boring. Your story is so interesting, I can't see myself NOT reading because of the few odd words here and there. Trust me, that's saying something. I'm so lazy I could be the poster child for it, so mentally correcting generally does not work with my personality. However, by your hand, I have been sucked in when no chance of escape. I look forward to the rest. Onward, my lady. Lead me where you will. 

--KD

I love this story! I am on the edge of my seat sitting here at work reading this! I sooo can't wait until the down and dirty smut begins! The anticipation has my heart pounding! Please, please, please, please, and PLEASE undate soon!!!! xoxoxox

Aha, the plot sure thickens around this mysterious kelpie! He's still so damnably hot though...it's ridiculous *huffs* Miroku realized a little too late that hell hath no fury than a woman scorned lol! He should be more careful in the future and learn from this lesson. I'm really curious to know what Yasuhiro is going to do now, hm....

Lovely chapter, angel! I enjoyed it a lot and can't wait for the next! keep up the good work ^_^

Looks like I need to go back & watch teh anime again, I halfway remember this episode or something similar. Just as an FYI when Kiyo-hime bites Miroku withering is something plants do when they die, to shrivel; fade; decay, the word you wanted was writhing, to twist, as in pain, struggle, or embarrassment.

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.