What a mess! Sesshoumaru has feelings for Kagome and she, in her confusing mind, thinks that he is Inuyasha, the one she loved, and practically jumps on him. he ends up caught in the moment and if the one opening the door is Inuyasha, things will be even more messed up. Great chapter.
Mona (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 May 2015
Oh please, please, please update soon. I have fallen in love with this fanfic and can't wait for the next chapter. Who burst into the office? Will Sesshoumaru stay to find out Kagome knew it was him?
Wait... So she remembered just white hair.?.. And thinks sess is Inuyasha? inuyasha celibate? And the door opens! Omg yoi are getting the plot ball rolling on this chapter?
Interesting, keep it coming.
No way..!
Sesshomaru only a cameo in this chapter. I want more..!
I still curious to what happen in her memory.
I like this story so far...at first I was confused...but it is making more sense...i can't wait to see what happens next...
good job...
Her memories came back?!?!?!?
No Uta (Chapter 4) - Sun 17 May 2015
Chills!!!! So many chills!!!! You kept me at the edge of my seat as I continued to anticipate Kagome's and Sesshomaru's meeting. I'm excited to see how the rest of this familiar encounter commences.
Another nice one, keep it coming.
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Fri 15 May 2015
Spectacular detail in this chapter. It is very well written. You took us on a journey into Rin's past as well as mind. I am curious to see how and if Kagome and Rin's relationship develops. I am anxious for Sesshomaru's arrival in the following chapter. Thank you for another wonderful update.
Yay..finally you make sesshy-kun appear next time. What about inuboy? Is he still alive? I hope kaggie is sesshomaru personal assistance. And i thought only kagome lost the memory,does everyone also amnesia too?
Mona (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 May 2015
Please update soon, I enjoyed reading the new chapter
Nice chapter, keep it coming. I made a mistake on the poem I put Good took when it was suppose to be God took, so here it is again with a new one.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
M- is the million things she gave me. O- means only that she's growing old. T- is for the tears shed to save me. H- is for her heart of purest gold. E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining. R- means right, and right she'll always be.
Happy Mother's Day!
I am impressed with the details you're using which throw me right into the scene as I see through Kagome's eyes and having experienced haughty, impolite people in my life too, I can understand Kagome's feelings toward how she is being disregarded by the females she had seen at an earlier point. I, too, always tend to greet people I come up next to when waiting for an elevator and I smile even if I feel they prefer to not talk to me. It's something I was taught to show your best side even in an uncomfortable situation. You can certainly tell when someone, a stranger, wishes to be left alone or has already decided they wish you weren't there in the same place as they are. Hm, well I can tell anyway. So when Kagome's powers started to rise in the elevator I thought perhaps her spirit knew something and was just protecting her even though she wasn't actually conscience of it.
Looks likes they are some rivals in this group of females all applying for jobs. I can imagine the trouble that these 2 females will cause if they qualify for a job. As I am sure, I'll bet everyone is wondering about the woman Rin who walked in. Kagome felt something when Rin and she looked at each other. I have to wonder as all probably are, is why Kagome was forced to forget that time that she went to fetch Buyo from the well. All this time Kagome has never had interaction with youkai and yes, I understand youkai tend to keep to themselves, but to never come across these people until now? Hmmm, curious.
You're doing a great job dropping small hints throughout these beginning chapters. I love trying to figure out where you're going with this before you actually tell us. I am intrigued by the mystery.
Hugs and kisses, JEN
Tashi (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 May 2015
Another great chapter, very detailed. Things have certainly heated up. I can't help but to wonder if the administrator is the same Rin from Kagome's past. Mmmph! Those youkai females are very interesting, maybe I am getting ahead of myself, I just can't help the curiosity. When I hear red headed female, right away I thought of Shippo, then wine red eyes and I thought of Naraku. Family perhaps??? Update Soon!!!
Tashi (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 May 2015
I am thrilled that you have started another story. The chapter gives the impression that a conspiracy is involved, so much mystery surrounding her memory lapse. Please continue, I love long stories that do not give away everything by the first chapter.
I like also the descriptive flow and the plot itself. There are so many avenues that you could explore with this one, and I do not agree with your comments. Your fics do not start off slow, every chapter serves a purpose and is of the right pace. I look forward to the next chapter.
Halcali (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 May 2015
Hmm, I really wonder what happened in the past for the Gods to tamper with Kagome's memory. I'm especially curious as to why her reiki flared, and why a mere glance from Rin made her go all lightheaded. Curious.
It's also interesting to read about the youkai/human dynamics. I love that bit in the story, especially.
Thanks for updating again! You did a great job! I'm speculating and theorizing now, as I type!
DivaG (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 May 2015
It seems to me that this job is very sought after, and it seems this Akane will cause problems when selecting and perhaps even later. Would this Rin be the same that Kagome met in the past? I'm curious.
Is it rin that actually little rin in the past? I miss sesshomaru. I hope he came out soon.
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