Another wonderfully mysterious chapter. This is such a tantalizing tale and only the second chapter. I'm curious as to why her reiki has flared while in the building? What has caused her body to react in such a way? There must be an immensely powerful presence somewhere in the building or could it be something completely different? I cannot wait until her interview! Fantastic update!
I want you to definitely continue this! There are so many avenues you can go from here...so many possibilities! I am also very impressed with the writing. You've come a long way. I liked the descriptiveness where most just brush over things.
Sounds to me like someone did a number on Kagome's memory, for what reason I'm unsure, but that's why you need to continue to write more. Not all first, or second chapters catch the reader, but I know you and your wickly twisted imagination....LOL
I can't wait for more. This is a short review but don't let it get to you. I'm being urged to eat and to feed my new kitties since I slept all day. PJ hates when I put off eating and seeing as she made it sooo dang hot, I'm reading your fic first and now the kitties want food and mine is waiting.
Gotta go for now.
Love ya!!! JEN
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is interesting and I'm liking it, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Hi..glad that you finally came out with new story. I hope the update not too long. So..next chapter please.
Halcali (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015
Intriguing, and I love modern day AUs! Looking forward to the next!
DivaG (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015
Hello, this story seems interesting. I am curious to know why Kagome's memories are lost and if the new reality is really changed at the point that her own family doesn't remenber what has happened in that year she can't recall anything. Or are they hiding the truth on purpose? Anyway good start.
No Uta (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 May 2015
I am intrigued. You've definitely got my attention.
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