I have just finished the Nutcracker chapter and I can finally stop to review as I've been reading this story non-stop for days between work and well, life.
I love the positive theme this fic has, how it inspires overcoming adversity and hardship. I appreciate it's down-to-earth quality and the attention given to current social details about life in Kagome's time, constantly reminding you where you are in the time line so there's no uncertainty there. Mentioning 'Twilight' and 'The White Stripes' pin points the location of this story according to our own time, giving the reader a deeper sense of relation and making them feel more apart of the story.
The variety of your vocabulary and attention to real life details is impressive. I love the way you've incorporated music, political views, and means of social interaction into the plot.
You depict the main character as a 'careful' drinker, purposefully ordering drinks light in alcohol to keep from getting inebriated, another positive influence for kids who are no doubt reading these things all the time.
From Kagome's foul mouth to her graphic outbursts, I love this charater. I love how she's depicted and the trials she's endured.
I love the fact that she smokes weed, an element I've been trying to incorporate in fics unsuccessfully for ages. You've done so flawlessly, in my opinion. You set a positive message for those struggling and offer motivation to overcome obstacles, to fight back, to remain in control of yourself and your emotions.
I feel like you're describing me, I relate to this fic so well. I do alot of sewing, making corsets, pants, skirts, and shirts. I can relate to her love of coffee. I have no problem sharing graphicly inappropriate information.
But I don't paint and I don't play guitar or sing, so, I'm lacking in the Kagome-talent department. Though I will still imagine it's me with Sesshomaru next chapter, lol. And I do relate to not only the self-image distortion implied, but Kagome's insecurity issues as well.
To cut it short, her ability to take "Looking on the Bright Side" to the fullest extent continues to be an inspirtation to me here as it is in the anime and I appreciate that you were able to capture that quality in Kagome.
I could probably go on and on, but I'll stop here.
KM (Chapter 30) - Wed 03 Mar 2010
I love the use of the lightsabers, very clever, it certainly made me smile. This story just keeps me coming back for more, thank you!
Hello Ms. Pirate! Long time no review! ^__^ I’ve stopped going on mediaminer because all the fics I read are updated here – including yours! I’ve said this so many times buuuuuutttttt:
THE SPARK!!!! It’s a FIRE now!!
Kagome: ROOOAAR!!
??Roar??
um…I was listening to a Korean-Pop song called “Fire” by 2NE1 and was reminded of DWS. Had to review after that prompting.
I’m still trying to get that dAart group up! It will come to pass…sooner or later! ^__^;;
--okay real review time:
That was ingenious incorporating the I-Want-Tetsusaiga fight from the manga into your fic but using star wars light sabers instead. It was perfect! What I liked the most about Sesshoumaru’s childhood story was the characterization of Ken Taisho. Sesshoumaru’s father was well-meaning – not at all a devil. In the anime, he gave Sesshoumaru the Sword of Heaven because he genuinely thought it was better for Sesshoumaru to have. I bet money that Inupapa in the anime knew Sesshoumaru would eventually be stronger than him (yey for bakusaiga) – that’s why he gave Inuyasha the tetsusaiga. Likewise, I think Ken Taisho thought the green one would be the better one for Sessh. It’s a little different since it’s with kiddie toys, but the concept is clear: inupapa ain’t no monster!
Oh and btw: I have a terrible tendency to incorporate lines from your fic into my regular speech.
ducky out!
OMG LOVED IT!!!!!!!! that heffa kagura and her mother need to watch herself and how low do you really have to stoop that you have to get close with the person's kids or nieces and nephews just so you can get close to the person of your desire smh thats ridiculous....but loved this and please update soon
Everytime you update I always find myself jumping to your story and reading the next installment.
I wish you could update faster!!~ This is the greatest alternate universe fanfiction I have read :]
Anyway, please keep up the great work :D
kedala (Chapter 30) - Sun 21 Feb 2010
Oh Kagura, Kagura...with her sense of entitlement to a man and child who obviously don't really care for her. She's oblivious...or maybe not, just extremely headstrong and determined to get what and who she wants regardless of how the other party feels. And then to try to get on Rin's good side. How deplorable. So glad Rin is able to see right through her. Oh how I despise her in this story. But I guess that's the point. lol
And yes, Kagome is trying to keep herself from getting hurt. She likes him - a lot - but doesn't want to like him more than he likes her. :-) lololol.
Great chapter...wonderful ending! Excited for the next one.
K
I really love these people you've created. You've made them very real, very human. And, while the wait for this chapter was hard, it was worth every second!
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