I really wasn't expecting them to get together so soon at all! ot that I'm complaining :P The terror of losing Rin, the elation at finding her againa nd the loosening of Sesshoumaru's emotional barriers made the perfect setting. I really hope that the morning after isn't a complete reversal. Thankyou so much for another FABULOUS chapter!
One word only: marvellous!
You were able to keep up to all our expectations: the sweetness, the lust, the urge, the not so hidden love topping up an awful beginning of the day. I really loved how Kagome's second thoughts about their new liaison were answered by an always attentive Sesshomaru. So caring...
And now I keep on thinking about:
1. Kagura. Will you be so cruel to make Kagome see them together at Portabella and misunderstand the work related dinner as a romantic one? >( (please, no!)
2. Kagome's aggressor: will he pop up later on?
3. In-laws: how (and when) Sesshomaru's parents will discover the brand new thryst and how will they react? (curiouscuriouscurious!)
Great job! I am really looking forward to your updates...
Ah, brilliant! Finally! I'm so glad these two finally got together. How perfect and beautifully written. ^_^ I greatly enjoyed this chapter. I really love them together and the way that you write them is just fantastic. They come together wonderfully in your story and become complete people together. Very excellent. I'm glad the wait wasn't so long! ^_^
this was perfect it was an excellent way for them to realize their affections for one another...cant wait for the next update
Another great chapter as always! So can't wait to see what happens next with our lovely pair. ;) I just love this story, keep up the great work pirate!
Love it. please update soon!
REDWOLF (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
Maybe theres a hole in the comdom....one can wish (lol)!
Oh, my, GOD!!! After reading that chapter I almost felt like either having a drink, smoking a cigarette, or both!! (and I don't even smoke!) What a PERFECT ending for a chapter!! And what a wonderful ending for a year!! I am constantly looking forward to an update to this wonderful story and to find one today it was the perfect ending to a great year!! Thank you so much!!
So, I have to say that I didn't expect for them to finally get together, but it happened and I am so happy!! Those 2 really deserved to have something special and this was just the right thing!! I was thrilled to see that Sesshomaru finally realized what was missing in his life, and to have finally lost that well crafted control of himself with Kagome!!
It was beautiful and so well done!!
Now I go back to torture myself awaiting for the next update! AAARRRGGGHHH!! I can hardly tell you how much torture this is!! I love this story so much and it is a well deserved addiction that consumes my emotions and fills me with anxiety until my next fix! Please have mercy and update soon?? Perhaps as a B-day gift?? (One can only hope!)
Much love and the best wishes for a new year full of inspiration and muses dancing lightly around you wispering what to write next!!
Hugs:
MidCat
Alpine (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
HOT!!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!!
What a great chapter to end 2009 with... (fans herself wildly) I can't even begin to tell you how great that was. You kept them both very true to their characters and that was splendid.
Can't wait to see another chappy. Happy New Year!! Hugs Alpine ^_^
cjflutterbye (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
WUHOO!!
Love it! As always a super job! Can't wait to see what happens next!
RIKA (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
Finally, they have done it. *lol* You can only fight fate for so long. Took these two long enough.
Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the amazing work.
Mander B (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
I LOVE YOU! Damn, finally! I have no words to say other than thank you, your Awesome with an 'O'. Your just to perfect in your writings! Change the names and get this story published!
kedala (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
Oh my! Finally. Thank goodness that they finally, finally did the deed. lol. But I must say it was so satisfying to read mainly because of how you've written the slow progression of their relationship from enemies to acquaintances to friends to lovers. It makes perfect sense and they fit together so wonderfully. And the trip to the mall, Rin was so cute talking to Santa and her impatience with Sesshomaru not knowing how to play I Spy, lol. I'm glad she found Shippou's dad, that was a scary moment. Talk about an emotional rollercoaster in just one chapter. ...but as they say, 'there's got to be a morning after.' I'm sure Kagome will psychoanalyze what she just did and positive a certain slimy character will bring some doubts about Sesshomaru's feelings for her. But that just adds to the drama, and we love, love, love drama.
Another great chapter. sess and Kag finally got together....YAY! I can't wait to see the progression of their relationship. I sense a little danger coming. Is the guy that was released from jail going to make a scene and cause Sess to go into hero mode? You are so awesome!
Wow---I love your story. It is written realistically and believably. Love the insecurities and the safe sex---the comment about Scarlet's Preparedness Award was a nice bit of levity. This was as you had it--two people that have grown to love each other (well--that can deepen too), just needed to have something so straightforward and primal. No gimmicks, no pretenses.
Nicely written. Now is Sesshoumaru staying behind while his parents and Rin go to Florida for a few days? I am curious what Kagome made everyone for Christmas.
Well Done!
BW
Oh wow! That was a surprise. I didn't expect that. Nice. I just hope that Kagome doesn't feel bad about it later.
Geeze, I would have had a heart attack if I'd lost one of my kids in a place like that. My boys liked to hide and I'd freak the hell out because we lived on a lake.
So, Kagome believes in Santa? Hm. Very interesting. Seems that Rin might get her wish after all. ^_^
Pure awesomeness!!!! I loved this chapter...hell I love the whole story! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for everyone's favorite couple lolz!! I remember you mentioned the Nutcracker; it has indeed been awhile since I've seen it. Thanks for the wonderful update! And thanks for the awesome lemon.
joyouki (Chapter 29) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
OH MY GOD! That was down right juicy! Happy New Year to all of us who have waited patiently for this romantic juice! It was awesome! Thank you so much! I can not wait for the next chapter. I gotta go now and reread this!!!
ZOMG, sweetheart, WHAT A WAY TO CLOSE OUT THE YEAR AND THE DECADE!!!!! Whew... your lemon skills are just as awesome as they ever were, and the emotions you evoked during Rin's disappearance struck deep. I'd be GREATLY surprised if every mother out there who reads this doesn't get a little breathless and choked up reading that part. WOW, what a roller coaster you've crafted here. I'm not sure if I'm relieved that Sess & Kags are finally "together" (although I KNOW it won't be without glitches), or still keyed up over the whole Rin thing. This, my dear, was simply MASTERFUL. Delicious. ALMOST better than dark chocolate Grand Marnier truffles!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for posting now - how do you always manage to do that just when I need it the most??
;D
~~me~~
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