Well, this was somewhat action packed. I also liked the details about how the three were fiting into the group, although I'm not surprised at Inuyasha's behavior. I don't know what he was thinking walking up to stand at the entrance to Sesshomaru and Kagome's cave. He obviously wanted to see something and most likely knew that he would and just couldn't stay away. I mean they are mated. What did Inuyasha think his loud complaining and exclamations were going to do, other then waking and irritating everyone and causing a scene? Sesshomaru definitely had a right to be furious. I know I would have been. Still, even with what has gone down with all the fighting I'm thinking that the issues with Inuyasha are not over.
And now Kikyou knows that Kagome is in the picture. She may want Kagome to stay hidden and only be pulled out as a secret weapon, but I'm still not trusting her. She's a wild card. I feel that if the situation doesn't go to her liking she might try to use the information of Kagome's presense for her own strategy.
Oh and something I hadn't considered before. What happens if Kikyou dies in terms of Inuyasha's behavior? Would he become even worse and focus on Kagome even though she's mated and unavailable?
I was surprised and happy to be proven wrong about the updates once a month. So I'm going to guess chapter 29 to be out around the 10th or 11th of April. Here's to hoping it's sooner.
mari (Chapter 28) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
awesome thanks.
rose (Chapter 28) - Sat 22 Mar 2014
next chapter please update soon please
So I stumbled across your story and read the chapters you have up currently in less than a day. To say the least I am enjoying what you have done so far. I'm saddened to know there is so little left but grateful for the fact that there is still more to come! You are doing a great job. The only thing I've noticed is a couple mistakes, mostly just some of the words not having spaces between them. Otherwise it's really good! I look forward to the rest of the story!
rose (Chapter 27) - Sat 15 Mar 2014
next chapter please update soon
Everytime this story is updated, I'm either in the middle of reading another one or am too busy with other things. I finally had free time today and I have to say I'm so glad I finally had the chance to read it. I'm a curious and impatient person so it was probably a bad thing to read this now before it was done because my mind will be racing a million miles a minute thinking up responses. Can't wait for more :)
Ah. I had been wondering where this chapter was. I loved it. I love the casual closeness between Kagome and Sesshomaru and that Inuyasha's presence isn't stopping it. I like the points that Sesshomaru brought up as well. I wonder how long it'll be before Inuyasha starts a fight with someone or tries to talk to Kagome. I still can't believe he thinks she betrayed him. I wanted to reach through the story and slap him! And Sango and Miroku thinking that they'll be able to make up with Kagome. I think he had it right when he said that might not happen. They were all willing to toss her aside and take her jewel shards just because Inuyasha didn't want her around anymore. Some friends. In my opinion stuff like that would take years to repair if at all. And that's not adding in the danger factor and all the life she had missed in her time.
Well, I can't wait for more. I want to guess at when the next chapter will come but I don't know anymore. I'm kind of thinking the updates are once a month now. -shrugs- I'll use this month to test that out. But being wrong would be great. :D
tonya (Chapter 27) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
loved the chapter!
Only three left? Oh no! I'm so excited though x
rose (Chapter 27) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
next chapter please soon
mari (Chapter 27) - Tue 04 Mar 2014
great update thanks.
What? ending? T_T
blood stained also ended.
im so saddddddd
Its about time! I think I have been waiting since the very beginning for Kagome to let her friends know how she feels. I mean really!! What kind of friends say what they did? Not the good kind, thats for sure. And its sad to see that Inuyasha is as stubborn and pigheaded as ever. I was hoping with this meet he might have grown up a little but alas it was not meant to be. I am happy that kagome is not feeling to bad about not being with them. I like the fact that Kagura and Kanna are working for Sesshoumaru. All around this is a wonderful story. I can't wait to see what happens next? Is the final showdown coming soon? What happens next? Or do we follow the story line a little bit more. So many avenues to wonder that you are going to take. Thanks for writing such wonderful work.
Aryos (Chapter 26) - Thu 13 Feb 2014
Thank you for the update! Gah so frustrated with Inubaka. He so dense! I love this chapter and to see the shock on inuyasha's group.
keep it up!
Inuyasha is too damn stubborn I wish I could pound his head with Hiraikotsu, lol
Suka25 (Chapter 26) - Mon 10 Feb 2014
love it! MORE!!!!
Yes
rose (Chapter 26) - Mon 10 Feb 2014
next chapter please
mari (Chapter 26) - Mon 10 Feb 2014
awesome update thanks.
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