This one took longer then expected to be updated but it was good. I like the fact that Sesshomaru is thinking about mating her so that she really will be completely out of Inuyasha's reach. I hope he can talk her into it. I also can't wait to see what happens when Kanna joins them. It should be interesting. I wonder if we're going to see Kikyou again soon. I'm curious to know what she's up to if anything. Anyway, I'm going to guess that chapter 21 will come around the 21st or the 22nd. Sooner would be excellent. :-)
mari (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Oct 2013
thanks for the update.
Soooooo hm.
I am totally confused.
Nice job on the mystery and secrecy.
So, I guess I'll keeping going.
Amazing please write more i love it so much
mari (Chapter 19) - Wed 18 Sep 2013
i really love this story its great thanks.
thanks for the update. will this be a one sided slaughter on naraku's side? O.O
will there ever be romance? haha
Denise (Chapter 19) - Wed 18 Sep 2013
The story is coming along great. I feel like everything is falling into place. Great update :D
Nice chapter. I was surprised by Kanna. I really hope it's not a trap. I like how things turned out with Kagura as well. She was definitely surprised by Kagome's appearance. And I'm not at all surprised that Sango and Miroku are starting to catch on to the third faction going on. As long as they don't know Kagome's involved all is well. With that said I can't wait to see what happens next, and the next chapter should arrive around the 29th or 30th hopefully. :-)
Alii (Chapter 19) - Wed 18 Sep 2013
Sneaky, sneaky, sneaky! (: Please update soon!
rose (Chapter 19) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
next chapter please
Excellent chapter, keep it coming.
tonya (Chapter 19) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
excellent!
Denise (Chapter 18) - Tue 03 Sep 2013
So close, yet so far...Great chapter. I can't believe Innuyasha couldn't figure out the smell. I can't wait until evryone finds out Kagome didn't leave.
TKE (Chapter 18) - Mon 02 Sep 2013
I love the suspense.....can't wait to see what happens next
rose (Chapter 18) - Mon 02 Sep 2013
next chapter please
So late, keep it coming.
So late, keep it coming.
Interesting deal with Kagura. I wonder how she'll manage to get her heart from Naraku, and how she'll deal with Kanna. It won't be easy otherwise she would have done it already. I'm not sure i trust her, but at the least she'll be good for information. I like how Kagome's protection works. Being invisible like that. Is she invisible to those she doesn't want to find her or is it everyone not in her group? And what did Inuyasha smell? Was it a sampling of Kagome's scent but distorted or something? I get the feeling from this chapter that Kagome's presence will be revealed soon. I'm still hoping that she and Sesshomaru will be mated before Inuyasha finds out. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Can't wait for more. I'm guessing chapter 19 quill be out around the 15th or the 16th. :-)
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