uh oh. what is the big bad wolf gonna do now?
Spent some time in airports have we? LOL... described to a 'T'! You have the 'little girl attitude' nailed down tight as well.
The interplay between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is delightful and his putting two-and-two together about her being Scarlet had me rolling! I can just see her mind flashing back to ALL she has ever written, and the cold wash covering her when it hits he is a long-time loyal reader of the column... LMAO!!!
I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it!
Write on, pq... write on!
Phirst (Chapter 23) - Fri 22 May 2009
| This story is very well written. I love all the different relationships present within. The way you write this makes it feel almost as if these are all close friends of my own, which greatly adds to it's appeal. The detail is lovely, easily allowing one to imagine the emotions and images you present. I've actually found myself crying during some parts, cheering through others, raging at a few sections(because of what was happening within the story)and laughing through a good chunck. Absolutely wonderful! There's nothing better than being able to be drawn into a story. Dancing with Scissors was actually one of the first SessKag stories I read, and it's one of my top favorites. I look forward to reading more of this story (especially now that the scarlet cat is out of the bag)! Thank you for providing such great reading material!
| Thank you! thank you thank you thank you thank you for updating this amazing story. I know I say this everytime I review but I ablsolutly LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I love the characters, and how their relationship is building. I just can't wait for them to finally get together. I hope you update again soon. :-)
Hahaha i was hopeing that sesshomaru found out about her colums eventually. By the way i love the fact that you add put the whole advice thing into the story the make me laugh. I begin to realize maybe my sex life is normal. lol. I love this story in general, and i can wait until the next chapter come up. Im looking forward to this art exhibit of hers im sure that it will be awesome. Keep up the good work.
Sumi (Chapter 23) - Thu 21 May 2009
OMG yes! This is a good way to start your summer vacation. With a fantastic story that has awesome chapters. What's next, what's next!!?! Can't wait for the next update.
He's gonna scare her off if he's not careful.
Love the update!
| Hi Piratequeen 0405! Another great chapter! Things seem to be moving along with Sesshoumaru and Kagome, which I'm excited about. However it seemed like at the end they encounted a small speedbump BUT being the brilliant writer that you are, will make it so my favorite couple will bypass it with no problem.
I do have one question for you, one thing I've noticed as a trend with Kagome is that the numerous things (for example her knowledge from crafts, art to mythology) that Kagome is into is written with such detailed description. Did you bring your own personal experiences and integrate them into your story or did you research them? Either way, this proves that you are a wonderful writer. Please keep up the great work! I look forward to your next update!
Your Fan,
Sesshoumaru's Lady
Mander B. (Chapter 23) - Thu 21 May 2009
Finally!!! Yay, you updated. God, I love this story so much. I have read so many for years now but this one I have to say is the best. Its realistic and written so well. I like how Sess figured it out by himself. He is extremely smart and bam it hit him. It is time for some heat to get between them. I hope we dont have to wait as long for an update for the next chapter. I get so giddy when I see it updated!!!
OH EM GEE. I am sooooo happy you updated! This is one of my favorite fan fictions EVER. I simply adore the way your write the characters. The relationships and the tension. Actually, this is one of the rare stories where Kagome actually has a HOBBY and substance and is there for more than just Sesshoumaru's fucking pleasure. Please keep writing!! I really hope to see another update SOON!
I wish I could express in more words how great this work is! Thank you so much.
Zyren (Chapter 23) - Wed 20 May 2009
oh bloody hell the shyt has hit the fan!!!! oh goody! i just love it all!
I clicked on Dokuga to see if any fics were updated and didn't see anything at first and clicked a different bookmark... BUT then I saw 'Dancing With Scissors' high up on the list of updated fics and HAD to come back and read. I'm so glad you updated!! Pssst.. I would be THRILLED if you updated tons in the next 2 weeks because I'm having surgery next week and will be laid up with nothing to do/read :) *pout*
Yay! A new chapter! I'm glad that Scarlet has finally been outed... No unexpected fallout from that.... but I just can't shake the feeling that we'll be hearing from Kagura again soon...
BluMystique (Chapter 23) - Wed 20 May 2009
I'm developing a love/hate relationship with you. I love that your story is ridiculously fantastic and addictive and hate you for the exact same reason since you don't update as often as I want; which would be every freaking day if I had my way. *Sigh*. Another wonderful, wonderful chapter that has me even more hooked and looking forward to the next chapter, that I'm hoping will be soon :D
Annachie (Chapter 22) - Mon 18 May 2009
| piratequeen0405, your story is lovely. AU is not really my cup of tea, but I have fallen in love with your characterizations. I have looked forward to reading these chapters as much as Sesshomaru has looked forward to reading Scarlet Letter'd. You are a very talented writer. The dialogue is especially fun to read; you are very adept at conveying personality through conversation. My favorite scene to date is the one in Sesshomaru's bathroom, but there are many others that are close runners-up. Your story has made me laugh and cry (in all the right places!). It is said that reviews should be balanced, so I will say that the only thing that I have noticed is that you sometimes drop a word or two in a sentence-I like to think that you are typing so fast as the ideas pour onto the page that your fingers can't keep up! Now that I have caught up to the last chapter you've posted, I find myself joining the legions of fans who plead for you to Update! Update soon! Thank you so much for giving the fans of the Inuyasha universe something this wonderful to read.
| waiting.... (j/K) but seriously waiting for an update
ashleekyle (Chapter 22) - Sat 09 May 2009
| ok you are really killing me here. I am greatful this chappie was really long but it has been over a month since update. This story is crying out for attention and I will be it's advact. PLEASE PLEASE update. This story is so awesome and the characterization is terffic. I can not wait for the next update. I love it so much, and Sesshoumaru is in love. I feel like singing Sess love Kags over and over till he proably kills me but oh what a death. Again can not wait for the next update. And Rin was too cute admonishing Kags for her treatment of Sess while she was sick, but who could blame the girl. I would defintely not mind that booty call. please update you know you want to.
| Snatulence...this is totally my new favorite word. I read the "letter" and response that included that to my boyfriend, who thinks that my fanfic addiction is strange and disturbing, and he laughed. Thanks so much for the great story and for introducing me to my favorite new word. Kudos!
Breezy (Chapter 22) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
This was absolutely beautiful. Your writing is fantastic and it feels so real. You made Kagome real, you gave her depth and you breathed life into these characters. I have laughed, been horrified and have choked up many times. This last chapter was just fantastic; the video and Sesshomaru's admission struck a heart string. You are very talented. I am looking forward to the future chapters.
Dani (Chapter 22) - Sat 04 Apr 2009
| OMG! This is an AWESOME story! I wish it was done so I could finish it tonight. Wow, you have done an excellent job with this. I love how all the character are portrayed. I really don't have anything negative to say. All I can say is that I hope that I don't have to wait long for an update. I will be checking everyday probably more than once a day. Great job!
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